Him and Her

[FiliaLunae]

This is a story of a prostitute and a man who falls in love with her.
First, there is Desire!
Then, Passion!
Then, Suspicion!
Jealousy!
Anger!
Betrayal!


When love is for the highest bidder, there can be no trust.
Without trust, there is no love!


No Laws. No Limits. One Rule. Never Fall In Love.


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Author's notes:

1: Yes, the above was taken from Moulin Rouge, so expect a story where there's weepy scenes of love, and some comedy thrown in. Sex? Definitely. See next point..

2: I'm still working out the later parts of the story, so you should head down to my poll (http://www.sammyboyforum.com/polls/148263-would-you-prefer-romance-story-sexually-charged-story.html)to let me know how you want the story to turn out.

3: I'm busy with school so I may not update for a week till 2 weeks at any one time. Also, I only recently started writing again, so need time to clear the writer's block.

4: I'm subscribed to this thread, so bump it up if you like it and I'll be reminded to update! =)

5: I will most likely write this story with His and Her point of views. I like to make my stories interesting with formatting, so expect lots of formatting thrown in. Occasionally I might include pictures..


Disclaimers: All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. I do not own any part of Moulin Rouge, and I'm not making any money from this fanfic (though I wish I did, and I wish I owned Ewan McGregor..he's so hawt...)

[FiliaLunae]

-Prologue-

The stars fell and dawn spread its warmth over the sleepy village.

"Mama, papa, wake up! Wake up!" The little boy scrambled into the room that his parents slept in and shook them urgently.

With sleepy grumbles and mumbles, the mother and father woke up even as their little boy pranced around at the foot of their pallets with a slightly-crumpled paper in hand.

"Whas...that?" The father reached for the paper, it being the object that must have woke his son up.

"A letter from Sister! And some money too!" In his other fist, the little boy opened his hand to reveal a thick wad of notes, his eyes glinting excitedly

The mother dipped her head so that her chin touched her chest and pressed her palms together in praise and thanksgiving that her eldest daughter had managed to get to the city safely and even found a job so quickly. The father pushed back the blanket for the sun was already warming their small house. As he pushed back the blanket, revealing the stump of his right leg, he sighed and read the letter slowly out loud.

Dear Mama and Papa
When I arrived at the train station, it was so noisy. I had to shout over the noise for the price of the ticket into the city. They have told me that because the value of money has increased, I would need now to pay more money than what was originally told to me.

For this I am glad and grateful that you have given me your savings, Mama, for now I am in the city, and am earning money at a acting studio. I have comfortable lodging, and my friends are helping me to settle down. Please do not worry about me, Mama and Papa, as I will take care of myself.

I have included some money, Mama and Papa, for repayment and for medicine for Papa's leg. Papa, please get well soon. The classes and sessions are tiring and I miss you all, but I will come home when I have earned enough to support us.

Your daughter
Myn

Tears of joy streamed down the parents' faces as they counted the money, not knowing what exactly their daughter did to earn so much. Carefully, they put the money away, promising a few notes for their children to go to the market (for it was market day) to spend on candies and delights.

Then the mother helped the father to stand, and steadied him on his crutches. Slowly, they made their way to the family altar and gave incense and thanks to the gods, and prayed for their daughter's safety. The mother slipped the letter into a tin box, along with the first letter that her daughter had written when she had reached another village closer to the train station, and closer to her dream of becoming an actress...a star.

[SGDreamchaser]

nice one.. keep going./ =)

[alex18122003]

Thanks for sharing :D

[FiliaLunae]

X( Couldn't sleep so I came online to post a bit of a sneak peek.
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"Come here" He whispered, sitting at the corner of the bed and beckoning to her to sit with her back to him. Hesitantly, she sat down and smiled tentatively at him, catching his gaze in the scratched mirror. Why am I hesitating like this? I have known so many men, yet he makes me feel different.

His hands travel led to her breasts, squeezing their fullness in his palms, rolling the dark peaks between his fingers. His eyes never left her face, watching her facial features as they relaxed into a sigh of pleasure. He pulled her close, burying his face into her neck and kissing the soft flesh there.

For a long while, they sat there in silence, the only sound the soft whirr of the ceiling fan.

Move, Myn. Pleasure him.

But before Myn could do anything, he slid back on the bed, guiding her till she laid down beside him. Then he half sat up, and explored her body, kneading corded muscles when he found them, or simply squeezing the meatier parts of her for his own enjoyment. When he pushed apart her legs, catching her right one with his own legs to prevent her from closing them, she tensed.

"What's wrong?"

"Oh, it's nothing. I'm sorry, but you paid for me to pleasure you..but..."

"Hush, you will pleasure me by letting me pleasure you." He frowned up at her, as his fingers lightly touched her dewy folds.

She let out a soft sigh as his fingers seared her most private place. She kept just a strip of hair on her mound, just like how most of her regulars liked it - clean shaven.

"Show me how you like to be touched." His deep voice startled her out of the half daydream that she had entered.

Face flushing for the first time, she moved her hand down to guide his, using his fingers to give herself pleasure. Usually I have no problems when customers ask me to do so but...why with him...

As his calloused fingers rubbed her hard clit, she moaned - sometimes she would moan because it was really enjoyable, but most other times, she moaned because it added to her tips - but this time the moan was sexy and throaty from the pleasure that he was eliciting.

He grunted with delight upon seeing her folds glisten with her inner nectar, and without warning, plunged a thick finger into her womanhood. He watched her arch her back into the air, eyes squeezed tightly shut...as tightly as her pussy was gripping his finger right now.

His rod hardened even more in his pants, the strain causing him some discomfort. But he leaned into her, thrusting his finger in and out of her, curling it so that it hit her G-spot with every movement.

"Cum for me, baby. Cum for me!" He growled as he withdrew his finger, and thrust two in on the next stroke, reaching for her G-spot and pressing hard against it. With his thumb, he found her clit and rubbed it in circles.

Her moans increased in pitch and frequency as he rubbed against her G-spot, causing a tremor to start in her womanhood, and spread like a tsunami throughout her entire body.

"oh god...oh god...OH GOD!"

[toreador]

Wonderful. Please carry on.

[diogenes]

Strong language skill. Thanks.

[block11]

impressive... signing up for the fan club :D

[richie_rich]

Setting up my tent. This is going to be a very interesting campsite. Would need more potato chips and coke liao.:D
Sis FiliaLunae, please don't take too long in-between posts ya? ;)
Cheers!

[Cheonging101]

Ahh... fanfics are great for inserting the scenes of heroes and heroines to fuck each other senseless but never did because the original author was being a total numb-nuts to censor/exclude it. :D

[simple2kee]

impressive... signing up for the fan club :D

bro block11, count me in. i like her good language skill. :)

[Enzstar]

Got anymore coming ?

[topfuel]

nice selection of words

[gambit88]

I Have Subscribed To This Thread Too, Hope Can Help Improve My Writing Skills From Reading Your Story. :)

[topcook1]

Nice one!!!Camping for more..

[MillerV]

wahhhhh KC story le

[natsuki]

Bump bump bump...

Lunae luv, dun kip me waiting for too long, i love the way u expressed the words and emotions.... =)

Jia you O... =)

[salacity]

Another maestro of erotic literature! Thanks for sharing.

[HornyYoungBoy07]

Excellent story! :) Hopefully we dun have to wait too long for updates... Pls continue.

Cheers
HYB07

[FiliaLunae]

Hey guys and girls *muakz~*

My friend is coming over to SG so it will be really hard for me to log on and post stories. NO MATTER WHAT, I promise to keep updating. At least a good long (thick, maybe. juicy, definitely..) one every week, or every 3 days, at least =.="

So sorry! X( I also running a bit dry in the brain department

[FiliaLunae]

-Desire-
-Act 1-
-Knowledge-

A siren from the deep came to me
Sang my name, my longing


"Don't look so shocked! I'm sure girls from your village have landed up doing the same thing. It's always the same story, y'know? Father has to sell off the land, and Mother pawns her jewelery, and then Daughter pitches in to help, selling the only thing she has to sell - her body. It's a good way to make a living...better than selling off land and jewelery - after all, you can sell your body over and over again."

Myn woke up in a cold sweat, the words of the other girl - permed, frizzy hair, light make-up and blouse so sheer, her bra could be seen - echoing in her mind. The wind that blew through the open windows of the train chilled her; the rumble of the steam engine echoed the thumping of her heart.

She got up to close the window, careful not to awaken the other girl, then sat back down. Her uncertainty reflected in her black irises as she mulled over her choice of going into the city with no prospective jobs.

The other girl awoke, stretching out on the cramped seat. She sat up and looked over at Myn, and smiled sadly, nudging her, "Hey, it's at least better than having to sew clothes in a tiny stuffy room all day. The mama-san may take half of what we earn, but she keeps us safe from the police."

"B-but.."

"And..the customers aren't too bad either - they are never too drunk, and some of them are real gentlemen." The girl nudged her again, "I'll take care of you."

Myn paused, eyeing the girl before making up her mind.

"All right. Thank you"

[FiliaLunae]

-Reserved-

[FiliaLunae]

-Desire-
-Act 2-
-Fear-

Show me myself without the shell

"Mama-san!" The other girl, who had introduced herself as Daio, called out as they stepped into the dimly light 2-story bungalow. The paint was peeling off, and the air stank of cigarette smoke and a foreign smell. Later Myn would learn that the smell was stale sperm, a man's fluids.

Myn stood behind Daio, her eyes cast down onto the scarred tiles as the 2 women held hands and exchanged greetings.

"Daio, who is this that you've brought to see me?" Mama-san acknowledged Myn's presence after their banter, cocking an eyebrow in her direction.

"Oh Mama-san, this is Myn. She came from the countryside looking for a job, and she hopes that we will be able to make her a sister, one of us, as well." Daio smiled and nodded.

Myn shot a look of surprise at Daio, opening her mouth to speak, "But I-"

With the false happiness of someone accepting an unwanted gift, Mama-san took Myn's hands and examined them, "Oh yes..very nice..very nice. How old are you, Myn?"

Myn stammered, "18 this year, Mama-san." As an afterthought, she added, "I have studied my words and numbers too."

A bark of laughter came from the 2 women as they escorted her upstairs into a small room with a single ceiling fan and a naked lightbulb hanging from it. There was a dresser with a misty and badly scratched mirror opposite the rickety old bed. The bed had a thin mattress on it, and on the mattress was a pair of pillow and bolster that looked like they had not been washed in years.

Mama-san caught Myn wrinkling her nose at the sight and tightened her grip on the girl's hand, her acrylic nails digging into her skin. With the other hand, she shooed Daio away, "Listen, girl, we're all here to do one thing - to earn money by satisfying men. We were all once country girls who came to the city to earn money to help our families back then." Mama-san's tone became less harsh, and not unkindly she said, "It's a quick way to get money, and we have paying customers." The doorbell sounded from downstairs, and Mama-san patted Myn's hand, "Now settle yourself in and take a quick bathe. Daio will show you the ropes."

With that, Mama-san left the room, and Myn noticed that as Mama-san walked, her steps became more fluid, and her hips swayed more pronouncedly with every step. Then there were male voices, rumblings under Mama-san and a few other girls' shrill laughs as the main door closed.

Myn closed her door in fright, and sat down on her bed, a feeling on helplessness stealing over her body. Tears started to fall down her cheeks even as her door creaked open and Daio came in.

The bed sagged as Daio sat down beside Myn and put an arm around her bobbing shoulders. "Hey..don't cry. The men don't like to see us crying. Besides, it's your first day here. No one will ask for you until Mama-san puts you up. Come, we'll take a shower and then I'll lend you some of my dresses and hairpins. I'll teach you to put on make-up and make yourself look pretty so that you can be the number 1 lady here, okay?"

Drawing her sleeve over her eyes, Myn sniffed, resigned to her fate, and nodded her consent.


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Apparently I took too long to come up with something. So I couldn't edit my above post X( Anyway, there we go. Something to think about for the weekend. ;) There will be something good for you horny ppl in the next Act: Cleansing!

[simple2kee]

camp here for the next act. :)

[richie_rich]

My friend is coming over to SG so it will be really hard for me to log on and post stories. NO MATTER WHAT, I promise to keep updating. At least a good long (thick, maybe. juicy, definitely..) one every week, or every 3 days, at least =.="



eh sis, were you describing your friend? ;)

[gyrfalcon]

Fabulous. Awaiting your update.

[Earth Angel]

Waiting patiently for your next installment.

[splendour]

Waiting for you to be recharged.

[falconboy]

Nice. Please continue.

[hoho99]

Hmmm camping for more stories:D

[natsuki]

Girl, please come back to update the story~~
I luv ur siggy too... Esp the trust part....

Without trust, there is no love!

True, isnt it...

[FiliaLunae]

-Desire-
-Act 3-
-Cleansing-

Into the blue memory

Myn peered into the smoky gloominess and shuffled forward, clutching her bathing items to her chest. "Daio? Daio, I can't see well in this darkness"

"Don't worry, it's just a little further up" Daio called reassuringly from behind her.

Myn paused in mid-step and cocked her head towards a door. There were rustling sounds coupled with a female's lusty moans and a male's lower-pitched grunts. She turned around, a frightened expression on her face.

Daio patted her arm and murmured, "Close your ears and let's go. It's part of our lives - we try not to hear what is being said in our sisters' rooms"

Upon reaching the bathing area, Myn noted the scratched and/or cracked mirrors and crusty sinks. She looked around for an unoccupied stall and hurried to it. She was just about to close the wooden door when Daio slipped in beside her.

Alarmed, Myn raised her voice, "What are you doing, sister?" She backed into the stall, and found the metal taps pressing into the small of her back.

"Shhh. Mama-san asked me to help you bathe and check you."

"Check me? What for?" The pitch of Myn's voice creeped up higher as she realised that there was no where to run. Even in her quaint little village, she had some privacy when she bathed.

Daio whispered, "It's okay. Relax sister. We all go through this when we first arrived." She quickly removed her clothes, carefully placing them on a hook embedded into the wooden door. Daio then made to remove Myn's clothes - a simple top, her bra, her trousers and panties.

Myn was too stunned to do anything to stop Daio, except to blush a deep red when Daio unclasped her bra. Daio smiled gently and started to fondle Myn's breasts - somewhat flat due to undernourishment, but dusky with large dark areolas. Daio paused for a moment and took Myn's hands and put them onto her own breasts - soft, yet full; her skin a lighter shade of Myn's with dark pink areolas already hard within the coolness of the room.

Myn went somewhat limp when Daio resumed caressing her breasts and upper body. The damp, cool sensation of the bathing area and Daio's warm hands created a contrasting effect. Her own fingers started to mimick Daio's on her body.

Exploring slowly, Myn rubbed her thumbs over Daio's hard nipples and pinched them hesitantly. A low moan issued from Daio as the pleasure mixed with the slight sharp pain.

Daio leaned in towards Myn and whispered to her, "Do you like this?"

Daio's voice broke Myn out of her reverie, "Huh? Oh..yes, I...I think so" Myn blushed again, then moaned when Daio leaned down and closed her lips on Myn's left breast and sucked on her nipple. Her tongue circled it, her teeth scraped against it, teasing it. Daio smiled around her mouthful and looked up at Myn, whose back was arched. Her mouth was slightly open and little gasps escaped her lips. Daio moved to her other breast and gave it the same treatment.

Breathless, Myn whispered, "Daio..yours are so soft and big.." and pinched her nipples once more before moving her hands to Daio's waist, pulling her close. Daio straightened against Myn, rubbing her nipples against Myn's and eliciting a louder moan from her.

Then Daio gently brushed her lips against Myn's. Myn, already a little disorientated by the building heat and a wetness that she was experiencing in her pussy, leaned forward to capture Daio's lips.

The two girls - slim, nubile, dusky-skinned bodies pressed against each other - started to be more frantic in their groping. Daio pressed her hands against the slick wood behind Myn's head to prevent herself from slipping, while Myn grabbed Daio's waist and pulled her closer with more urgency.

When they finally broke apart, Daio noted with a slight smile that there was a hungry light in Myn's eyes. Daio took Myn's hand and brought it down to her lightly-downed mound. Myn's eyes widened as Daio spread her swollen and wet pussy and allowed Myn to explore by herself.

"Daio...are..are you sure that we..we should be doing this?" Myn's voice cracked - but with fear or excitement, only Myn could tell.

"Yes, sister..Sometimes it helps us to earn more money." Daio's words came out a bit slurred as Myn's fingers found her clit. A groan escaped Daio's lips, only to be cut off as Myn experimentally closed her lips over Daio's.

As her fingers explored the surface and the deeps of Daio's pussy, Myn jumped a little when she felt cool fingers against her own pussy and separated from Daio. Myn looked up uncertainly at Daio, who smiled back reassuringly and circled her thumb over Myn's clit. Myn groaned and sagged a little, and would have fallen if Daio hadn't caught her in time.

Myn started to tremble a little as Daio started to rub a little faster, occasionally sucking on Myn's hardened nipples. Suddenly, Daio pushed a finger into her hot, dripping pussy. She (Daio) felt a barrier - the hymen - and smiled secretly to herself. Mama-san is going to be pleased.

Myn's pussy contracted around Daio's finger as she felt it enter her, sliding past her lips and just..just lightly brushing past her clit. The beginnings of an orgasm started to rock Myn.

Her breath came in short gasps, and her body started to shake. Daio expertly focused on Myn's clit and brought her orgasm to pitch. Myn almost screamed from the intensity of the sensations and thrills spreading through her body. Daio didn't stop till Myn came a second time, her back arching, pushing her pelvis against Daio hard.

Finally, a minute or so later, when Myn relaxed, Daio carefully removed her finger from Myn's sopping wet pussy and licked it experimentally. Then she offered her finger to Myn, who sniffed a little tiredly at it, but perked up when she tastes the slightly-salty fluid. Within a few seconds, Daio's finger was clean.

The two girls cleaned themselves up, washing each other gently under the running water. Myn shyly smiled at Daio, who left a little early to allow Myn her privacy.

When Myn walked past a room that had its door slightly ajar, she overheard:

"She's just right, Mama-san. She's unbroken, and if well-trained, can be a tigress in bed."

"Lovely. I'll think of something to show her off officially then. Thank you, Daio."


For those who have not read the first few chapters, I highly recommend that you guys read through the pages - it's not that hard (haven't reached 10+ pages yet). I've also explained in my very first post that this story combines both real-life and fiction, so don't complain to me about how there are too much weepy love scenes. I do my best to write all the sex scenes without censoring too much, but without being too crass/crude at the same time. I think a lady ought to have some elegance, don't you think?

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To those who have been following this - thank you very much. When I last left you guys hanging, I had ran out of brain juice due to my other commitments. But I am grateful that you guys stayed on, and I hope I will not disappoint. If you want to see some scenes in this story - for example, a fantasy that you have - you are always welcome to PM me and I'll see what I can do =)

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Well, hopefully you had fun reading this - I had a lot of fun writing this and I have to admit, I'm a little wet now =P Thank you for stopping by and I hope you will stay on for more!

[gambit88]

Welcome Back Sis Luna!!!

Nice to see you writing again :)

[FiliaLunae]

Hi everyone =)

I received a few PMs which asked similar questions, so I thought I'd post the answers here too, so that we are all clear

Q: After the prologue, you wrote about Myn being together with a man already (http://sammyboyforum.com/showpost.php?p=4150298&postcount=5) - what's going on?
A: This was just a sneak peek of a scene that I had conceived about 3 years ago. It was meant to tease my readers, and keep them waiting XD Thanks for waiting guys!

Q: What is your inspiration for writing this?
A: I would say that I have a general idea of how this story will be structured - I guess a big inspiration of mine is Moulin Rouge (as mentioned in the very 1st post). Also, some scenes are inspired by some of the erotic literature that I've read, some by my own fantasies, and some scenes are inspired by what I have personally experienced. I would say, as the author, that you may not think that certain scenes could have happened to me, or to anyone in real life - well, you might just want to rethink that.

Q: Do you plagarise? (This was rephrased by yours truly from "You copy the scenes from where one?", which was preceded by "I dun believe that your story is real..English got so good one meh")
A: As I mentioned above, I am also inspired by some of the erotic literature that I read. There are a lot of things that I've yet to (s)experience, and the only way I can envision a scene is via reading. So my answer is NO, I do not copy wholesale. I do have to admit to reading a few stories and then putting that scene into this story, and tweaking it so that it becomes a bit more infused with my style. Also, I believe that it's only right that I do my best to type out proper English (not trying to be atas here or whatever). If I type in twit talk, then inevitably it's gonna be translated into my real-life writing - not a good idea.

Q: Do you give English classes?
A: Unfortunately, I couldn't teach you how grammar works. I can only advise that you read more books, as well as the newspapers (the Straits Times. I think the New Paper doesn't use English well). If I was old enough, I'd lament the fact that storybooks aren't popular with the children anymore.

Q: Will you be putting up pictures?
A: As I mentioned to the person who asked me this: I need to manage expectations. I don't want to promise pictures and then half-kill myself trying to get said pictures to you guys. I'm a camera-shy person, btw.

Q: How about I take you out for a drink?
A: Sure, if it's only for a drink. Any thing else and we'll talk business - if you know what I mean.

Q: Can I bed you? (loosely translated from "Can I fuck you? What's your going rate?" etc etc)
A: I'm not sure if I want to answer this question X)

Thanks and hope everyone had an enjoyable Easter/long weekend~

[Komuso]

I like this story. It's well-structured, which can be a very difficult thing to do when you have to pay close attention to the details as well; it is an erotic novella after all.

It feels closer to Memoirs of a Geisha rather than Moulin Rouge though, but since it's supposed to be inspired by the latter, I hope there will be somewhat of a musical element... I'm always a sucker for that :D Looking forward to the next part.

[FiliaLunae]

Rushing a final assignment so brain juices are pretty dead. Won't be updating for a couple of days, at least.

Komsuo: Thanks =) I'm not too sure how you think this is closer to Memoirs of a Geisha - unless you're referring to the fact of how Myn actually starts on her path as a prostitute XD but then again, geishas often are stereotyped as prostitutes, but I don't think of them that way. To each our own opinion, I guess.

The entire story should be following how Moulin Rouge was like - desire, love, betrayal (although this can be disputed), jealousy, death. I don't intend to make any main characters die in this story, but who knows what I would fancy in the future? Also, I'm not sure if this was evident enough, but some of the characters are based on my real-life experiences with such people (you guys know who you are). So yes, if I feel like killing someone IRL, I might just kill him/her off in the story. =D

Also, I'm not too sure what you mean when you say about the musical element - I mean, I know how Moulin Rouge was considered musical..but I thought I would have enough of the 'musical' effect by including lines from songs that mean a lot to me as the opening line for each act. Now that I've exposed this fact, you guys can figure out more stuff as well XD

If you're thinking of something different for the 'musical element', why not PM me and let me know what you envision and maybe I can work something into the story? X)

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[Komuso]

I'm not too sure how you think this is closer to Memoirs of a Geisha - unless you're referring to the fact of how Myn actually starts on her path as a prostitute XD but then again, geishas often are stereotyped as prostitutes, but I don't think of them that way. To each our own opinion, I guess.

The coming from a poor village and making a living serving men erotically, the presence of a character of mama-san capacity, and the 'oriental' backdrop are very reminiscent of Memoirs, or at least the movie version of it. You're right about Geishas though. They are a living embodiment of Japanese art worthy of tremendous respect. Of course, getting to bed one of them is quite a divine experience, I would imagine :D

The entire story should be following how Moulin Rouge was like - desire, love, betrayal (although this can be disputed), jealousy, death.

These elements also figure prominently in Memoirs. But of course, your story should and will figure out its own style and ideas; I'm sure no one would want it to simply be a replica of another story elsewhere.

I'm not too sure what you mean when you say about the musical element

Music has always helped to set the tone for ideas, drama, and art in general, for centuries. I was thinking perhaps of some youtube embeds to set the mood; like what i did for my own thread. It's entirely up to you; I can provide some recommendations of course, but I'm not sure if it will point your story in the right direction, given that I'm not supposed to... know the conclusion :p.

But most importantly - happy writing, and may this be a fruitful mental... and erotic exercise :D

[FiliaLunae]

The coming from a poor village and making a living serving men erotically, the presence of a character of mama-san capacity, and the 'oriental' backdrop are very reminiscent of Memoirs, or at least the movie version of it. You're right about Geishas though. They are a living embodiment of Japanese art worthy of tremendous respect. Of course, getting to bed one of them is quite a divine experience, I would imagine :D

I would think that it's all in the men's imagination =P Geishas are afterall, still human. But I wouldn't know, would I? XD


These elements also figure prominently in Memoirs. But of course, your story should and will figure out its own style and ideas; I'm sure no one would want it to simply be a replica of another story elsewhere.
I guess I didn't delve into Memoirs of a Geisha like how I did for Moulin Rouge - the songs probably fascinated me.


Music has always helped to set the tone for ideas, drama, and art in general, for centuries. I was thinking perhaps of some youtube embeds to set the mood; like what i did for my own thread. It's entirely up to you; I can provide some recommendations of course, but I'm not sure if it will point your story in the right direction, given that I'm not supposed to... know the conclusion :p.

Oh, okay. Yeah, I read through your thread a little - sorry, I'm really tempted to say tl;dr, but I shall be nice for once and say that I had my assignment readings, which by the way is TRUE.

The thing about YouTube videos..well, not everyone will go and listen/watch them. So I thought that if I put any in, and no one goes to listen/watch them, the mood kinda gives way.

I'm also sure you won't know the conclusion. Personally, I'm not too sure about the conclusion either. Like I said, it's somewhat based on my own life too, and I don't want to stop living any time soon.


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Back to my work then. >.<

[FiliaLunae]

Next act will be just some normal stuff - a development of the characters, if you will.

Again, any input regarding any fantasy or real-life scenes are welcome X)

[Scorp888]

"When love is for the highest bidder, there can be no trust. Without trust, there is no love!"

You are totally right. It's no different from prostitution.

[FiliaLunae]

Just a quick update: I'm working on the next act, as mentioned like 2 months ago. Sorry for the delay! I had exams and stuff.

[Rickey]

Just a quick update: I'm working on the next act, as mentioned like 2 months ago. Sorry for the delay! I had exams and stuff.

Welcome back, sis !! Thank you so much for being so committed to us, writing this story for us to read and enjoy...Appreciate deeply :) Hers's wishing you good success in ur exams and in ur other stuffs as well. Really wish i could help...do let me know :)