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Qiyue-Sama
03-10-2009, 04:04 AM
I decided to share this story with readers in SBF...

Part 1

This happened one day when I and my 2 good friends were on the MRT back from Orchard to our home place, Tampines. As usual, we were having our usual crapping and jokes loudly in the train without considering other passengers. However, while we were crapping, I noticed this girl from a low end school in Singapore starring at us and giggling at our jokes. She is about 1.5m tall and should be around 13 years old, I can see her bra through her uniform and reckoned she be around an A+ or B-.

My good friends, Marc and Zee subsequently noticed her and we directed our jokes on her, like how lousy her school is and gradually made her abit mad. She kept her cool, but continued to stare at us. Marc noticed her torn clothes as well as some bruises on her body, signaling she is under some sort of abuse. I came up with a stupid idea, to stalk her to her house and never did I know that would change my life.

She got off at Pasir Ris MRT Station while we followed at a distance. We reckoned that she does not have a handphone or MP3 player as she walked without taking them out for entertainment, we also noticed more bruises on her hind legs. We took about 20 minutes before she finally reached her block.

We waited for her to enter the lift, but to our dismay, some other people also entered the lift and it was those type of upgraded lift where it stops at every level. 3rd floor, 6th floor and 8th floor, we did not know so we just ran up the stairs and searched level by level. At the 8th floor, we were tired and Zee suggested that we give up, so we turned to the direction of the lift. To our surprise, we saw her again, only this time, she was naked and weeping outside her house.

Will be updating 1 part a day...stay tuned...

To be continued...

gunner77
03-10-2009, 03:31 PM
interesting story

JamesNiu
03-10-2009, 04:06 PM
Hmm..interesting starting...wonder what happened next!!!

nihonjin
03-10-2009, 09:14 PM
I noticed this girl from a low end school in Singapore starring at us and giggling at our jokes.


You mean neighbourhood school si boh? I guess u from high end school lah but english also not very boomz leh... :cool: I also from low end school so pardon my english.

cannon
04-10-2009, 12:27 AM
Please continue soon, bro. Dont leave us in suspense for too long.

haha_123
04-10-2009, 03:05 AM
Singapore now got divided into low and high end schools?? :confused:

Ganache
04-10-2009, 03:42 AM
Nice story & keep coming.

Qiyue-Sama
04-10-2009, 04:11 AM
Hi guys, thanks for the comment. About the low end thing...lets just forget it...I just needed some school name...sorry if it offends...

Here's part 2

Her body was exposed in front of us. She had pink small nipples on her small sized breasts, and her bush was in her growing stage, barely covering her tight cunt. While Marc was ogling his eyes out, me and Zee decided to approach her. I took off my shirt and covered her (with much protest from Marc the Pervo) and Zee went banging on her house door. I held her in my arms while she was still crying, I consoled her by stroking her head and she seemed to calm down a little.

The door opened slowly, revealing a woman in her late thirties or early forties. She had a mean look like those type of shrew woman.

Auntie: Si mi dai ji (What’s the matter in hokkien)
Zee: What the fuck is wrong with you, dumping a girl out naked!?
Auntie: She my daughter leh, don’t kaypo hor!
Me: Knn you better take out her clothes or I call police hor!
Auntie: okok wait ah…

True enough, she took out her clothes, as well as her whole luggage…

To be continued...

LianLover
04-10-2009, 07:17 AM
You mean neighbourhood school si boh? I guess u from high end school lah but english also not very boomz leh... :cool: I also from low end school so pardon my english.

before i begin my post proper, i will like to, firstly, thank you for the best laugh i had in days. ......"I guess u from high end school lah but english also not very boomz leh"

secondly, "neighbourhood school" should also not be used degratory term, there are neighbourhood schools performing way above the "non-neighbourhood schools".

ok, now to begin proper....i from the high end schools....lol.... but was taken aback as well when i read the abovementioned line, i never realised that the segration of schools nowadays at such a level that certain schools are termed "low end".

However, as i read on, i guess in the next paragraph of the posting it explains why the girl's school is subjected to such "abuse" by TS. im guessing the main reason for mentioning that the girl is from a school which is not high on the ranks academically is because TS had wanted to cite his reasons for the verbal actions that transpired between his friends and himself when they wanted to get the attention of the girl, i.e. put down her school to get her mad.

true that TS should have used a better term, but i guess we are not here to discuss whether schools should be subjected to the caste system anot, so just relax, give TS a chance to finish his story, lets not scare him away. lol

Hello8985
04-10-2009, 09:23 AM
I think he meant elite and non elite school

nishikado
04-10-2009, 11:39 AM
camping here liao, please continue ok ! :D

Qiyue-Sama
04-10-2009, 01:40 PM
Ok i tell u all which school...then u all ownself decide....No***light School. I heard you either seriously suck at studying, mentality low, or retain too much then go there.

Qiyue-Sama
04-10-2009, 05:06 PM
First of all...let me thank all you people who support this story. As a matter of fact I have finished writing the story but will jus update 1 part a day...do not rush me thx.

Part 3


The girl’s mother threw her luggage at our feet.

Auntie: I don’t want you liao lah…get lost!

At this moment, the girl at my arms rushed to the door and started wailing. But the mother did not even look at her and closed the door. What a heartless lady…

Zee: CCB! So mei liang xin (no conscience)
Me: Eh so how?...get her clothes out first.

So we got her clothed and brought her to the void deck where we sat down and discussed.

Marc: Girl, whats your name?
Lin: My name is Lin..(Still crying)
Me: So how?...Call police or what?
Zee: Call police lah…let the police force her mother to take her back.
Me: Siao…take her back into that hell?
Marc: If not what? You take her back ah? My house sure cannot de…
Zee: Same lor…Jan, your house best lah…at least got 2 females.

Before I could respond, I found myself burdened with the responsibility. After a long thought, I called my mother.

Me: Hello mummy, I have something to discuss with you
The story…..
Mother: What? Call police lah…Like that later her mother say we kidnap how?
Me: Don’t worry, we 3 heard her say she don’t want Lin liao..
Mother: Our house no space leh…no money…cannot lah
Me: Let her sleep with mei mei (Younger sis), cut my allowance…
Mother: Aiya..I come back then say lah…(KUP!)

So, I brought Lin home with me.,,

To be continued...

Qiyue-Sama
05-10-2009, 09:04 PM
I know that wasn't much comments going on....but keeping my promise of 1 part a day...here is the 4th...

Part 4

We brought Lin nearby to eat first, seeing that she is hungry and chatted with her abit. She still seemed depressed but she still try to put on a brave front.

Me: Lin, you willing to come home with me?...but I can’t guarantee you can stay or not.
Lin: (Nods her head)
Zee: Jan, you serious ah?
Me: Can lah…like one more sister lor.
Lin: (Tugs at my shirt)..Thank you…

Since I was the one taking her home, I got Zee and Marc to pay for her food as well as top up her Ez-Link. Finally, it was time to face the music and I brought her to my home in Tampines.

After a long long long discussion with my family, they reluctantly accepted her on the condition that she continues her studies and immediately go home should her parents want her back. Lin kept thanking my parents as she was really grateful for all we done.

My father went to buy a mattress and put it in my sister’s room. I could tell my sister did not like the idea of sharing the room as she cannot continue her late night surfing. I volunteered to send Lin to school every morning and fetch her back should I am able to take out the time. At home, I would be her older brother as well as tutor as her grades are not as good.

To be continued...

phantomboyz
06-10-2009, 08:31 AM
dude,wondering whether u got ask her why her mom chase her out anot?for no reason,no any parents would beasting their children.

Qiyue-Sama
06-10-2009, 03:05 PM
Well...there wasn't the main point of the story...but if you wanna know...I could always ask...

naturegreen
06-10-2009, 03:36 PM
Ok i tell u all which school...then u all ownself decide....No***light School. I heard you either seriously suck at studying, mentality low, or retain too much then go there.

Bro, shall not wanna read too much into what you are grading. But for your info, it is not a low end school for goodesss sake. It is a school for the not so intelligent students who are not able to make it to normal secondary schools. The students there are not delinguents. Pls continue your story. :(

Medusa
06-10-2009, 03:50 PM
"Special School" you mean?

anyway...do continue with yiur story :)

Unrepented
06-10-2009, 04:12 PM
Hi,

I also from low end school like most samsters, but high-end schools must at least maintain english at high end also lei;

Just one of the many errors that needs correction:) "My two good friends and I....." Not "I and my two good friends".....just to help you with the forthcuming english exams:D

Good efforts on the story. Hope the story will progress such that you good good to her and she like like you like that, and let you bonk her. And not you pian pian a disadvantaged person and bonk her:(

But hey, man you the author:)

I decided to share this story with readers in SBF...

Part 1

This happened one day when I and my 2 good friends were on the MRT back from Orchard to our home place, Tampines. ......

Will be updating 1 part a day...stay tuned...

To be continued...

Royster79
06-10-2009, 05:33 PM
Nice story... :)

Qiyue-Sama
06-10-2009, 11:06 PM
For the low-end school thing...I APOLOGISE...so I hope it ends here...anyways...thanks for the support....

Heres Part 5


Lin gradually adapted to her new life and grew close to me. Every school-day, she would wake me up at 6am with breakfast made. We would eat our breakfast together while watching early morning TV. I would then go through her bag contents with her making sure she brought all she have to. Sometimes, I would have to forge her mother’s signature on her report cards as my family could not apply to be her guardian. We would then take a bus to the interchange and switch to MRT to her school. I would send her off at the gate and then slug home…because I am tired! Hahas…

During non-school days, Lin would stick to me. Normally I would hang out around Tampines area with my good friends and Lin eventually clicked with most of them. She would join in our conversations, our craps, our made-up religion (For more details on this religion please visit obuaism.blXgspot.com). We would be having fun playing with cats and kittens and disturbing people. I could see she is happy and for that, I am happy too.

It had been 3 months since Lin entered my family, and I had treated her as my own sister, as part of my loved ones. Lin also regarded me as her older brother, coming to me for help on her studies, and many matters of heart. One day, she asked me what is love, I answered that if she always wanted to see this guy and is happy just by talking to him, and her heart races when she sees him. I didn’t know that this answer would lead to…

To be continued...

Siong2
06-10-2009, 11:13 PM
Very nice start, can't wait to see how she will grow "closer" to you. :p

ultraman6496
06-10-2009, 11:14 PM
Wah, TS u "mian zo gang one ar" ???

So free ???

$$$ drop from Heaven ar ?

naturegreen
07-10-2009, 12:23 AM
Wah, TS u "mian zo gang one ar" ???

So free ???

$$$ drop from Heaven ar ?

Haha nice one! :D

alec
07-10-2009, 01:48 AM
waiting for more~~~

gyrfalcon
07-10-2009, 11:47 AM
Please continue with your story.

otacon
07-10-2009, 05:53 PM
TS, since u already finished the story then pls try to increase the pace of the story... going a little slow leh. i also wanna slug at home liao. tired leh

kingx3
07-10-2009, 07:39 PM
TS,

interesting short updates, only hope it can be longer.:)

chickyman
07-10-2009, 08:32 PM
Great post bro.

Martyn
07-10-2009, 09:05 PM
TS no post today?

Qiyue-Sama
07-10-2009, 09:48 PM
Alright as promised...1 part a day...thanks for all the comments be it positive or negative...

Part 5

That night, I slept early because I had to wake up for CCA the next day. It was a Saturday so I think my sister was fed up sleeping early and forbid Lin to sleep until she does. However, Lin was tired after a day in school so she knocked on my door.

Lin: Gor (Older brother)..Can I sleep in your room tonight?
Me: Why leh?
Lin: JieJie (My sister is 17 and she is 14) don’t want sleep early and I tired.
Me: Drag your tilum (Mattress) over here.
Lin: I want to sleep on bed can?
Me: Can lah…I sleep tilum
Lin: No..I want hug gor to sleep…

Ok…I gave in because Lin is the type who will pester until she gets her desired thing. So she got up my bed and slept beside me. The room was dark and I wasn’t wearing glasses so I could not see properly. By the time my pupils had gotten use to the dark, I realized that she was staring at me.

Me: Lin, cannot sleep ah?
Lin: No…
Me: Sleep ba…tired hor…
Lin: Gor I wanna look at you more…
Me: Huh?
Lin: Gor, remember I ask you what is love?...I think I finally understand…

With that, Lin came closer and started kissing me…

To be continued...

naturegreen
07-10-2009, 11:24 PM
Awaiting your next part TS. ;)

jomblo
08-10-2009, 01:52 AM
THIS IS IT!!!...

Solid story like MJ...hahaha... really like this kind of story as it really touching n arousing at the same time...post more le bro..i work until 2am only read SB so hope u can cheer my day up....

SamSeng79
08-10-2009, 02:23 AM
Nice one... pls update asap ok.. :)

lyster
08-10-2009, 03:09 PM
bro. don't one part a day la. very slow. =)

anyway nice story. just that the title not catchy enuff. pity i never discover it earlier.

good stuff!

Cuntworth
11-10-2009, 02:26 PM
Waiting for ts....:D

Publisit
11-10-2009, 10:41 PM
Ts still having fun until forget to come back.Hope he is back tomorrow.

SamSeng79
12-10-2009, 04:36 PM
Haiz.. TS MIA !! :(

blackhound
07-11-2009, 11:28 AM
Lin still seducing TS ? :p:D;)

ChevelleZ
07-11-2009, 01:21 PM
wahh...! quite a story! wondering wat gonna happen next!
TS please please submit longer story loh

whiteblue
07-11-2009, 05:46 PM
gone is the thread starter? :confused:

godbless
08-11-2009, 01:22 AM
we need more inputs!! TS where are u!?

Angelsonline
11-11-2009, 03:22 AM
TS MIA as he has been caught for doing underage girls lah... You can find him at Changi.

If you want to meet him in person, please follow the example of the recent guy who molested girls as young as nine. He will be seeing TS for some 30 years.

skinny191096
11-11-2009, 06:36 AM
I decided to share this story with readers in SBF...

.... To our surprise, we saw her again, only this time, she was naked and weeping outside her house.....

To be continued...

I personally know of a distant relative who has done that to her daughter.
The daughter was 14 years old at that time.
Due to some quarrels or something, that mother (a bit crazy) will force the daughter to go naked and force her out of the house.
Not only so, she will ask those neighbours walking pass to take a look at the naked daugher.
:mad:

Got a lot of family problems this type.
Mother mentally unsound- creates so much problems.......

_bOOb_
11-11-2009, 06:53 AM
TS MIA as he has been caught for doing underage girls lah... You can find him at Changi.

If you want to meet him in person, please follow the example of the recent guy who molested girls as young as nine. He will be seeing TS for some 30 years.

bro u so bad la.. say pple till like that.. ts mayb busy with his work..

satanic89
11-11-2009, 10:02 AM
nice...

keep it up

Angelsonline
14-11-2009, 04:01 AM
bro u so bad la.. say pple till like that.. ts mayb busy with his work..

Bro, not i bad... A lot of times, these ppl create a thread and post a story or experience. Then halfway through it, they just disappear. And best of all, it is always when the action is about to start. You just cant help but feel that they have been caught in the act and punished for it.

_bOOb_
14-11-2009, 11:53 AM
Bro, not i bad... A lot of times, these ppl create a thread and post a story or experience. Then halfway through it, they just disappear. And best of all, it is always when the action is about to start. You just cant help but feel that they have been caught in the act and punished for it.

jus put it as the story is not real lo.. ts out of thing to post liao so mia...

ossa
14-11-2009, 05:11 PM
TS still not back yet ??? :confused:

alphonse
14-11-2009, 05:36 PM
Anti climax!!!!!!!!!!!!

juswansex
14-11-2009, 05:46 PM
Hmm .. this story has potentil leh. Wonder if any bro here mind if I continue from the where the TS stopped. It will be fully fictional of course.

shawnieboy
14-11-2009, 07:16 PM
super anti climax!!!!!!!!!

Bowiesim
14-11-2009, 09:36 PM
No sister would do that. Never come across this.

GeMiNiZzzzZzz
14-11-2009, 09:38 PM
Aiya, his last post came more than 1 month ago...i think bros here should just move on to other threads ;)
Even if he comes back & post 1 more, you never know when he will be disappearing again..:o

Ah he
14-11-2009, 11:57 PM
Aiya, his last post came more than 1 month ago...i think bros here should just move on to other threads ;)
Even if he comes back & post 1 more, you never know when he will be disappearing again..:o

Agree with u bro !!!

w1erdguy
15-11-2009, 04:40 PM
why dont we imagine the ending instead of camping here doing nothing?

Quinsy
21-11-2009, 06:10 PM
there should be an agreement where after a certain amout of time, where TS goes missing, someone should step up to the game.

GeMiNiZzzzZzz
21-11-2009, 09:49 PM
there should be an agreement where after a certain amout of time, where TS goes missing, someone should step up to the game.

You wanna give it a try? :D
Im never a good story teller ...:p

Supra69
21-11-2009, 11:36 PM
maybe both of them together liao ?
ts bo time come in cont story

AsiaDick
22-11-2009, 02:02 AM
cant wait.... ending gonna be pretty juicy.....