A Love Story - Specially dedicated to a PRC WL in L1639

[Nato17]

Fish: You are amazingly beautiful. I think I like you a lot.

Water: Don't be silly. It is not very possible to like me so fast.

Fish: Really, I am not lying to you.

Water: I do not believe in Love at First Sight.

Time slowly passes, and the feelings for the Water becomes stronger for the Fish with each passing day.

Fish: I love being with you.

Water: I don't think so. You are feeling such because you have just become accustomed to me, that is all.

Fish: I love your zest in life.

Water: That is because you have not seen the world yet.

Soon, Days becomes months. And the Water has to carry on flowing down steam to join the River shortly.

Fish: I don't think I can handle parting ways with you.

Water: In a few days, you will forget about me.

Fish: I do not think so. I love you and will not love anyone else but you.

Water: Don't be silly. Those feelings you have for me is because you have not met anyone else besides me.

Fish: You are my everything!

Water: But, you are not my everything.

Fish: Then tell me, who is your everything? What is your dream?

Water: The Sea is my Love! The Sea is my Dream!

Fish: Is there nothing I can do to make you consider carry on staying here with me?

Water: It is not possible! If I do not flow on, I will become still water and will never get to see the Sea, the dream of my life!

Heartbroken, the Fish mulls about the prospects for losing the Water.

Fish: Then, let me accompany you to see the Sea.

Water: Don't be silly. You are only a freshwater Fish.

Fish: No! I will not allow you to carry on alone, with so much storms ahead.

Water: I will never have feelings for you.

Fish: I am not asking for feelings. I just want to be with you.

Water: You do know that I will never love you.

Fish: But you cannot deny me my right to love you.

Water: But you are harming yourself by carrying on this way!

Hence, the Fish accompanies the Water flowing down stream and after a few days, they come to the River. In the process, the Fish loses 50% of its life.

Fish: I am not sure how long more I can carry on accompanying you on this journey.

Water: Turn back while you can. The days ahead do not suit you.

Fish: NO! I will carry on accompanying you until my very last step!

Water: Why are you doing this to yourself?

Fish: Then why can't you accept a fool who loves you?

Water: But you already know that I love the Sea. And only the Sea is in my heart!

Fish: Why can't you accept my love, care and concern?

Water: I ONLY believe that the Sea is the one and only for me!

The journey carries on. The River soon joins the Lake.
The Fish is tired, and its life is now almost at down to 30%.

Fish: What would happen if I am no longer around?

Water: I will be very upset and hurt.

Fish: And what would happen if the Sea is no longer around?

Water: My heart will die and also die with the Sea.

Fish: Then our paths were never meant to be?

Water: Our relationship was never based on love, but it has a lot of memories, memories that will always be sweet.

Fish: And what makes you think that the Sea will love you?

Water: The Sea is my everything! My dream and I will NOT give up my dream!

The Fish is lost for words! But a promise is a promise and the Fish carries on the journey with the Water to meet the Sea.

Soon, the Lake joins the Sea and the Fish and the Water arrives at the sea side. The Water realizes that the Sea is its everything, HOWEVER, THE SEA is not the WATER only source!

The Water has a breakdown. After such a long and tedious journey, the Water realizes that there is no way to win the love of the Sea. The Water decides to leave the SEA.

The Water begins to think of the Fish. However, due to the long journey, the Fish is close to its last breath and its life is close to 2%.

Fish: I have seen the SEA. The Sea is very majestic. I think the Sea will treat you well.

Water: I have decided to leave the Sea.

Fish: Don't be silly. I am very sure that the Sea will realize how much you love it and repay you many times over.

Water: I think I AM WRONG.

Fish: How can you be wrong? You have sacrificed so much for the SEA. Surely it will be touched.

Water: Once upon a time, there was a fool who loved me. But, I took it for granted. And I lost him. God darn it, tell me you love me. God damn it, tell me you love me NOW! Tell me you want to spend the rest of your days with me. Please tell me you love me.

Fish: I cannot promise you anything. I will not be selfish especially since you love another.

Water: Can't you be selfish for once?

Fish: Don't be like that. I love you is my right and sacrificing for you is my honor. Loving me back is not your responsibility!

Water: Why was I so selfish? Why was I so silly? Why did I not cherish you earlier? Why did I not love you earlier?

Fish: Please don't say that. It makes my heart heavy to hear you say all those things.

Water: Why are you so good to me? Why have you sacrificed so much for me?

Fish: Forget about me. You will find someone else who is worthy of your love.

Water: Aren't you the person who I should love and cherish the most?

Fish: Don't be silly. In the days to come, I will not be able to accompany you any longer.

Water: I have been wrong all this while. I do not wish to be wrong about anything else. Please don't leave me.

Fish: Please do not be like this.

Water: I really have begun to love you deeply.

[Nato17]

It is Good Friday and I do have to do some crap first. Will continue shortly on this story.

Do give me your comments.

:)

Enjoy.

[Nato17]

If you do enjoy the story, please do up me with your points.

[jameschong1]

If you do enjoy the story, please do up me with your points.
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Up yr pts? I up yr backside!
What the fish u want to talk here?
No $$$ no water, no fish for u from china prostitutes, understd?
Yp yr IQ lah

[Nato17]

Fish: Don't be like that. I am already crying. Do you know how happy I am to hear you say those words?

Water: I can feel your happiness because you are now in my heart!

The Fish closes its eyes to feel the warm embrace of love.

[hj6066]

Quite a good read except it can get a bit melodramatic and draggy and long at times. It seems that it will have a happy ending or will there be a cruel twist at the end? How many times will there be a happy ending in such a situation in real life? TS, I assume you are the fish and the WL is the water in the story. Hope both of you get what you want in the end.

Waiting for the next part, upz you pts.

[Nato17]

Actually, I would rather that people consider themselves and their mates when reading this story. How many times has your Significant Other told you that he/she is not interested in you only to regret that they did not select you in the end?

I guess I should rewrite it taking into considerations what you wrote. Anyone wants to revamp it more?


Quite a good read except it can get a bit melodramatic and draggy and long at times. It seems that it will have a happy ending or will there be a cruel twist at the end? How many times will there be a happy ending in such a situation in real life? TS, I assume you are the fish and the WL is the water in the story. Hope both of you get what you want in the end.

Waiting for the next part, upz you pts.

[Nato17]

Disclaimer: This story is dedicated to a WL PRC from L1639. It is NOT about her nor myself.

[Nato17]

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Up yr pts? I up yr backside!
What the fish u want to talk here?
No $$$ no water, no fish for u from china prostitutes, understd?
Yp yr IQ lah

Excuse me. I have enuff $$$ as you put it to buy the fish. Just that $$$ doesn't buy u love. It may bring some pleasure but never love.

[jameschong1]

Excuse me. I have enuff $$$ as you put it to buy the fish. Just that $$$ doesn't buy u love. It may bring some pleasure but never love.
since u have enuf $$$, why don;t u but the whole brothel?
in this way, u can see fish swimming in the water and also eat fish everday.
by the way, your fish service good or not?

[Nato17]

Hmmm, have not heard any feedback about this story. Any feedback?

[just_1_pohpiah]

your story sucks!!!:p:p:p

[teebs_darklord]

What story??? :D

[TCSSS]

sorry ts, newbie here, dont really understand what u trying to express, mind to put it more simple, btw, thanks for the time and effort for posting this

[Nato17]

your story sucks!!!:p:p:p

Guess most brothers don't get it. Oh well.
Maybe if I translate it to chinese, some brothers may get it.

[alan0338]

Guess most brothers don't get it. Oh well.
Maybe if I translate it to chinese, some brothers may get it.

kamsia in advance TS for the chinese translation :D

[teebs_darklord]

Can translate to Hokkien or not huh??? :D

[alan0338]

Can translate to Hokkien or not huh???

nnkc, sibei siong to write tat :eek: u continue the rest hor, i write a bit since now free :D

wu jit diao hee ai tio chwee ( 有一条鱼爱上了水), dan si chwee ai tio hai ( 但是水却爱上爱海), kiet koh chwee gong yee ai hai nia (结果水很坦白地说,我只爱海啦,) , mai hee ( 不爱鱼 ) , dam bai eh hee gong ( 傻傻的鱼说),buay yao gin ( 不用紧), ni bo ai wa ( 你不爱我,), wa ai li jiu ho, ( 我爱你就好) kua tio li kuei sim ( 看到你开心), wa yah kuei sim ( 我也开心) ,

to be continued another day :D

p/s , simple summary is tats a fucking stupid fish .... :D

[johndoe8808]

Thanks for the story.
It's a good effort... maybe if you summarised it slightly.
Some of the less patient bros *might* get it better.

[teebs_darklord]

nnkc, sibei siong to write tat :eek: u continue the rest hor, i write a bit since now free

wu jit diao hee ai tio chwee ( 有一条鱼爱上了水), dan si chwee ai tio hai ( 但是水却爱上爱海), kiet koh chwee gong yee ai hai nia (结果水很坦白地说,我只爱海啦,) , mai hee ( 不爱鱼 ) , dam bai eh hee gong ( 傻傻的鱼说),buay yao gin ( 不用紧), ni bo ai wa ( 你不爱我,), wa ai li jiu ho, ( 我爱你就好) kua tio li kuei sim ( 看到你开心), wa yah kuei sim ( 我也开心) ,

to be continued another day :D

p/s , simple summary is tats a fucking stupid fish .... :D

Si Alan, u power lah...:D

[Nato17]

鱼说：你好美，我想我喜欢上了你。
水说：傻瓜，那仅仅是好感而已。
鱼说：真的，我不骗你。
水说：我不相信一见钟情。
日子一天天过去，鱼对水的感情也日趋笃厚。
鱼说：我喜欢和你在一起。
水说：那是因为你早已适应了我。
鱼说：我喜欢你的味道。
水说：那是因为你已习惯了我的存在。
几天后，水要继续远行。
鱼说：我已离不开你。
水说：过几天你就会忘了我的。
鱼说：不，我不会爱上除你以外的人。
水说：那是因为你还没有遇到除我以外的人。
鱼说：你是我的全部。
水说：你却不是我的唯一。
鱼说：你到底在追寻什么？
水说：只有海温暖的胸怀才是我的唯一。
鱼说：你难道不能为我而停留吗？
水说：不，一旦驻足，我就成了死水，就永远无法看到海的样子了。
鱼说：那我们能否并架齐驱？
水说：你永远无法追上我的脚步。
鱼说：你能否为我稍作等待？
水说：我只喜欢奔腾不息。
鱼说：无论如何，我都要陪你游向大海。
水说：别傻了，你只是一条淡水鱼。
鱼说：我不想让你一个人面对风浪。
水说：我不会因此而感激你。
鱼说：我不想博得你的感激，我只想和你在一起。
水说：你知道我不可能爱上你。
鱼说：但你不能剥夺我爱你的权利。
水说：你这样只会害了自己。
水和鱼经过了一条大河，鱼只剩下半条命。
鱼说：我不知道还能陪你多远。
水说：回去吧，这样的日子不适合你。
鱼说：不，就算到了最后一秒，我都不会放弃。
水说：你傻得迷失了自己。
鱼说：那你能否试着接受一个傻瓜的爱呢？
水说：你明知道我的心早已被海占据。
鱼说：为什么？你总不能试着爱上我？
水说：我只相信，海才是我的唯一。
鱼和水经过了一条大江，鱼的生命只剩下四分之一。
鱼说：如果有一天我不在了，你会怎样？
水说：我会伤心，也会惋惜。
鱼说：那如果海不在了呢？
水说：我会心碎，也会随他死去。
鱼说：难道我们的朝夕相处还比不过一个幻影么？
水说：没有感情的相处只是多余的记忆。
鱼说：那海呢，你确信他会爱上你？
水说：他是我一生的梦，我不会放弃。
鱼无语，默默地陪水走完了剩下的距离。
终于，他们到了海边。水看到了她的海，但她却不是海的唯一。
是啊，海有博大的胸怀，博大到可以容纳百川在他怀里嬉戏，却无暇顾及水的存在。
水不愿做海身边众多佳丽之一，她决定离去。
这时，她想起了鱼，而鱼早已奄奄一息。
鱼说：我看到海了，他是那么英俊帅气，只有他才配得上你。
水说：但我却觉得他扑朔迷离。
鱼说：别担心，总有一天，海会发现你并爱上你。
水说：也许我真的错了。
鱼说：不会的，你那么爱海。
水说：曾经，也有一个人那么爱我，可我却忽略了。你说，你说呀，
说你爱我，说你要和我生生世世在一起。
鱼说：我不想给你一个兑现不了的承诺。
水说：你为什么不能自私一点？
鱼说：别这样，爱你是我的权利，爱我却不是你的义务。
水说：为什么我总是那么自私，那么固执？为什么我没有早点爱上你？
鱼说：别这样说，那样，我会走的很不安。
水说：为什么你总那么好，好到让我感到无地自容。
鱼说：忘了我吧，再去找一个值得你爱的人。
水说：你难道不是最值得我爱的人吗？
鱼说：别傻了，以后的日子，我不能陪你。
水说：我已错过太多的日子，我不能再错过你。
鱼说：别这样。
水说：我真的爱上你了。
鱼说：我都流泪了，你看见我幸福的泪了么？哦，我忘了，因为我在水里。
水说：不！ 我感受到了，因为现在，你在我心里。
鱼幸福地闭上了眼睛，在水的怀里。

[Nato17]

nnkc, sibei siong to write tat :eek: u continue the rest hor, i write a bit since now free :D

wu jit diao hee ai tio chwee ( 有一条鱼爱上了水), dan si chwee ai tio hai ( 但是水却爱上爱海), kiet koh chwee gong yee ai hai nia (结果水很坦白地说,我只爱海啦,) , mai hee ( 不爱鱼 ) , dam bai eh hee gong ( 傻傻的鱼说),buay yao gin ( 不用紧), ni bo ai wa ( 你不爱我,), wa ai li jiu ho, ( 我爱你就好) kua tio li kuei sim ( 看到你开心), wa yah kuei sim ( 我也开心) ,

to be continued another day :D

p/s , simple summary is tats a fucking stupid fish .... :D

Try reading the chinese translation now. Stupid fish still?

[Nato17]

Can translate to Hokkien or not huh??? :D

Translated just for you. Can you read in Hokkien? :)

[teebs_darklord]

Translated just for you. Can you read in Hokkien? :)

Can...:D

So what's the morale of this story??? :p

The way I look at it, fuck and forget is better otherwise you will die at your own hands at the end of the day...;)

[alan0338]

Try reading the chinese translation now. Stupid fish still?

sorry my mandarin is half past 6 leh... :D

but will it be more comfortable if ppl were to say tat the fish is noble in order to pursue true love :D

nah, i cant 背对my良心， paiseh, to me its still a stupid fish. :D