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Indivisual
11-12-2014, 12:05 PM
This is my attempt at my very first post. Over the years, I've been reading posts from fellow Samsters here & I finally, few months ago, signed up an account here at SBW & decided to contribute to this forum as well after encouragements from fellow Samsters. All incidents are true, though not in chronological order & I'll try to relate as concise as possible. Do pardon me for my English, as it may not be as powderful as some bros & sis here, who've the natural gift of writing.

I've been reading about all the 'ups' & 'zaps', and I can't really fathom what it is all about or how to go about doing it. But do correct me if I'm wrong, to 'up' means support & to 'zap' means something negative? So fellow Bros & Sis, if you like what I'm writing, do 'up' me (no pun intended, but still sounds so wrong), and please do instruct me on how to return the 'up'. Thnx! But what's the points & power for? Somebody care to explain, please?

A little bit about me, I was born here, but grew up overseas, came back for NS, thereafter signed on for some years by chance before heading back overseas, and now, I'm back to SIN. Started my first sexual experience when I was in Pri 5, and never looked back since, and I've also come to realise the difference between making love & having sex. Having said all these, reckon I'm more of a giver than a taker (man's ego?) and would always want my partner to achieve her first O before I do, & subsequently attempt to achieve our big O together thereafter etc, that is until I met an ex-schoolmate of mine who claimed she can only cum once per session and my attempt to make her experience multiple Os, but that'll be another story for later...

I shall commence by introducing my Ah Lian neighbour whom we shall call her M, and myself J. I've noticed M for quite awhile, as I'm a sucker for nice shapely legs & bums, never mind the breast size. In fact, I do find huge breast a tad of a turn-off as they'll usually have big aerolas, like the size of our old $1 coin in the 70s & early 80s (fellow Sis Samsters, if you've such an asset, I do apologise for my remarks, as like they say, to each his own & one man's meat is another man's poison).

I first noticed M late one evening when I was returning home from a dive trip, lugging my backpack & pelican case. Thank goodness I don't have to lug my dive gears as well. As I reached my void deck, the lift door was closing & I raised my voice to ask whoever that had entered the lift to hold the door for me. I muttered a word of thnx and settled down my barang barang on the floor & I noticed a pair of creamy legs staring at me... looking up, I saw a perky bum held together in a pair of short shorts, and despite having a tiring trip, my lil bro, started to be a gentleman & stood up when a lady is around. Thank goodness I was wearing my rugby shorts with briefs, rather than my boardshorts which I would've gone commando or wear boxers, but there was still a larger than normal bulge infront of my shorts. I quickly shifted my waist pouch to the front hiding my erection.

M: Which floor?
J: 6 please, thank you.

I looked up at the person behind the voice & realised it belonged to a browned hair gal in her early to mid 20s. A trace of tattoo was peeking from behind her light coloured top. Hmmm, sweet face, I thought.

When the lift reached my level, I muttered thank you, grab my barang barang & left. Oh shucks, I thought to myself. Forgot to see which floor she is staying. Nevermind, I stood outside the lift for awhile to stare at the floor indicator and saw that it stopped at 8.

Ok, nice ending to an enjoyable weekend, I thought to myself... nice eye candy. But little did I realise that soon, I'll have an even more enjoyable weekend!



to be continued...

Spud_Boy
11-12-2014, 12:08 PM
good start.... do continue regularly...

Indivisual
11-12-2014, 12:11 PM
good start.... do continue regularly...
Thank you, cheers to that!

Indivisual
11-12-2014, 12:57 PM
Was a quite Saturday night and I was smoking & walking home from kopitiam after a short meetup with my ex-classmate & an ex-colleague, still feeling pissed that my fav $$$$$ had been sold out. Approaching my block, I heard a female Chinese voice talking cursing loudly, speaking in a smattering of Engrish, Mandarin & Hokkien with local accent, every once in awhile, peppered with descriptions of the male & female private parts, its descriptions in minute detail...

Wow, somebody is angry, I thought. As I neared the letter box, I saw a female, dressed in a light coloured sun dress, using the public phone. My x-ray vision started automatically... hmmm, nice legs, complexion & bum! Wah, this hour also got eye candy, I thought to myself.

Extracts of the telephone conversation goes like this: wah lan eh, you got time now don't mean I free. Last time I free & you have $, you also go chiong & don't accompany me. Dunno you luan gan, got disease anot... lucky everytime we do it, I make sure you wear lan chiao long. If not, think now I VIP at Kelantan Lane Polyclinic liao, see doctor, also no need queue up, got discount somemore!

Wah, too much of an info at this time of the night... my lil bro also beginning to kaypoh & want to see who is the one talking.

Just then as my footsteps echoed the still of the night, the female turned around... BINGO! M!!!

M: Hello, you got cigarette?

J: Yes (I know that she is asking me to spare her a stick of ciggie, but I acted blur. Since she asked me a question, I answered lor...)
As she turned around, I noticed something pointy around the her chest level... no bra? I know what she is gonna ask next, but I wayang & continued walking.

M: Eh hello hello, can give me 1 cigarette please?

Wah, know how to say please... ok la, but too bad, I'm smoking my last stick.

J: Sorry, last stick.

I then went up the lift. All the while, my mind kept playing the scene that she is having a tiff. Aiyah, spare her a ciggie lah. Forgotten about my $$$$$ already, I went home, took a new pack of cigarettes, and on second thoughts, open the fridge & took out 2 cans of beer. Then I proceeded to head downstairs again. As the lift reached the ground level, I could already hear M's voice even before the door opened.

As I turned the corner, saw M, squatting and using the phone. Nice curvacious butt... material of the dress is smooth, but I couldn't detect any vpl... seamless undergarment? ah mah teh kor? never wear? I couldn't get these thoughts out of my head.

Hearing somebody approach, M turned around and saw me. She quickly stood up.

J: Nah, I go upstairs take more cigarettes

M: Thanks (she took, lighting up)

Opening a can of beer, I offered her.

J: See you so angry, maybe this one can help cool you down

M: Kum siah, I really need a drink

J: I cannot sleep, so come down to drink & smoke. I'll be sitting there (pointing to a stone bench not far away). If you want more cigarettes, come find me, no need pai seh

M: Orh, thank you.

M then turned back to her conversation on the phone.

M: Who is that? My neighbour lah, you care so much for what? Scared he kao me ah? I let him kao so what? I like what...

The stone bench is not too far away, and I could hear M talking. Couldn't help but start to fantasize about M while watching her talking on the phone, still wondering what type of underwear she was wearing. Slowly but surely, lil bro started to rise again.

Suddenly, saw M dropped her cigarette and she bent forward to retrieve. The helm of her dress only reaches mid thigh, and it rode up her thighs, exposing the bottom half of her bum... OMG!!! No Panty!!! By this time, my kaypoh lil bro is wide awake, also wanting to see what the fuss is all about...



to be continued...

tigerwoody74
11-12-2014, 01:06 PM
Keep it up!

luvuass
11-12-2014, 01:23 PM
camping for more

sicknasty
11-12-2014, 02:40 PM
Please continue:D

blade
11-12-2014, 03:27 PM
wow.. nice first attempt. cont pls

FrOsTy-CoLd
11-12-2014, 06:04 PM
Wow, interesting thread.
Nice writing style.:p
Waiting for more

wildsoulx
11-12-2014, 06:13 PM
TS keep going. waiting for more! :D

genesis01
11-12-2014, 07:06 PM
cant wait for more :)

eddtan1
11-12-2014, 08:16 PM
Nice work bro...;)
Camping with wine and camp fire

Indivisual
12-12-2014, 01:54 AM
Thank you all for your support. Will update when free. For those who've up me and would like me to return the favor, kindly let me know & I'll return in kind, though my actions may be slow, so please bear with me. Still a noob here & a fellow bro is attempting to teach me how to do it. But goondu me still blur blur.

Indivisual
12-12-2014, 12:17 PM
Sorry to keep all waiting. I'll attempt to write whenever possible so here goes...


M: ok lah ok lah, you mai lor sor, I got no more coins liao so hang up now

Obssrved M hanging up the phone & she started to walk towards the lift. M saw me sitting down at the bench crossed legged with my little tote bag infront of my crotch.

M: Wah, so late still smoking & drinking?

J: Say yourself lor

M: I cannot sleep mah....

J: Don't give excuses lah... quarrel with boyfriend ah?

M: How you know?

J: You talk so loudly, at night somemore, quieter, and noise travells further, I think not just I know lor, the whole block also know liao...

M: Wah lan eh, like that sibeh pai seh lar...

J: If your volume control spoil, I can help tune (staring at her twin peaks)

M: Eh, don't anyhow see hor... (folding her arms)

J: Scared what? Dare to wear, then dare to let people see lah

M: What's there to see? Mine only Bukit Timah Hill, not even Mount Faber

J: Yeah, but at least not Redhill

M: Kia leh, we go drink somemore

J: Looking at the time, most of the places also closimg very soon.

M: Tsk, then how like that?

J: Or you go my house upstairs drink lah

M: Safe anot? Later kena rape ah...

J: Wah lan eh, think your face, pay me to rape you I also don't wang!

M: Wah, talk until like that, must give you some colour to see later (inside my mind, thinking she never wear underwear, how to give me colour see...)

J: So how? Want or not? If don't want, I go back sleep already.

M: Ok la, who scared who?

We then proceeded up the lift.

Entering the main door of my flat,
M: Wah, you live alone ah? Envy you... eh, how come tv in living room?

J: Wait awhile lah, my tv in the bedroom. Bedroom tv spoil so bring living room tv to use first. Stay alone, no need so many tv la. You want drink or watch tv?

M: Boring tv show la, got anything more interesting?

J: Like what? Porn? (Testing water)

M: Your head ah (hitting me on my arms)

J: Eh, want to watch in bed? If want, you go bath first. I like to bath before touching my bed.

Gave her a silk robe to wear.

Subsequently when M stepped out of the bathroom, her twin peaks was so pointy. Reckon it must've felt extremely sensitive over silk... She then sat down on my bed, channel surfing whilst it was my turn to bath.

Stepping out of the bathroom, I almost tripped and fell! M was sitting on the ned, but the front openings of the robe had fallen astray & there was a huge gap in between the legs, all the way up to a few cm below her privates.

Straightaway, my lol bro is 'almost bursting'...



to be continued...

DevilTan4480
12-12-2014, 12:32 PM
great story bro! Keep more coming. Thanks.

wantedbryan
12-12-2014, 09:38 PM
good story, more pls :o

hext3r
12-12-2014, 10:13 PM
good start... keep it up!

pasted
12-12-2014, 10:43 PM
Very well written. No power to up. So just give encouragement.

whatdoido
13-12-2014, 01:46 PM
Good start bro

gasscut
13-12-2014, 02:18 PM
nice start. keep going bro

Wilz9188
13-12-2014, 08:22 PM
awesome story. please keep going:o love mature ladies...:p

eddtan1
14-12-2014, 02:15 AM
Bro..2nd glass of wine liao..;)
Update soon

Indivisual
14-12-2014, 02:26 AM
Bro..2nd glass of wine liao..;)
Update soon
Sorry to keep all waiting... more excuses for all to get intoxicated? Hehe...

Hectic Sat... now still out & about waiting for next grp of friends, so decided to post while I can... stay tuned for next instalment...

Went home the ofter day after a long night out @7ish in the morning & guess who I met exiting the lift? Yes, M, and a lady who resembles her Mum too! And guess what? Her Mum is smoking hot as well! Nice figure & complexion & seems to be in her mid to late 40s... We just smiled & say hello, & as M introduced me to her, my lil bro also wants (note the present tense used) to be introduced as well...

Well, we shall see... maybe I can have an opportunity to up her Mum too? Hehe...

Indivisual
14-12-2014, 03:10 AM
I was wearing a robe with nothing underneath (habit of sleeping in my birthday suit) & my lil bro is already semi-awake, creating a small tent. Immediately upon seeing the gap, the tent became fully pitched.

M turned around when she heard me approaching & the sudden movements from the pitched tent caused her to look downwards at my crotch. It doesn't help that the my bedframe is low, and my ctotch was at her eye level.

M's eyes opened wider when she saw me, & her face turned a tinge of red...

J: So, what drinks would you like?

M: Anything lor...

J: I don't have Anything or Whatever leh... now don't sell anymore.

M: Why you so cheeky?

J: Only cheeky to pretty gals mah...

M: Wah, you use honey to bath, issit?

J: Why leh? I use honey to bath, you want to helo me lick ah?

M: Cannot, later too much honey will get diabetes.

J: Then I give you protein injection lor...

M: Nb, like that you also can think... quick leh, I thirsty liao. Hey, but hor, I see your Yoko rub beside the bed, I'm having some backache, can help me apply?

J: Orh, no problem. If you want, I can also help you massage. I studied sports physiotherapy before, and I can help ease your tension. How did you get hurt?

M: I also dunno, woman's problem lah, I get it once a month.

J: Ok, so you want drink first or massage first? I prescribe you medicine?

M: Huh? You doctor ah?

J: Nope, me not doctor, but I can prescribe you protein shake - 2 tabkespoons, 4 times a day.

M: Eeeeeek! Don't want, so disgusting.

Ho say liao, I'm thinking. Can veer topic to find out more about her intimate life... hehe...

J: You mean you never taste before?

M: Eeeyeeew, no way, my ex-bf once shoot on my face & abit go into my mouth. Taste salty & wierd. Then onwards, I never let my other ex-bfs try liao.

WAH! too much info!!!!!! My lil bro is so stiff that it's hurting abit. Acting decent, I added...

J: Actually, the taste depends on what the guy eats... your ex-bf likes eating fruits like mango, watermelon & pear?

M: No leh, he don't like fruits.

J: Diff people tastes differently, I eat fruits 3 times a day, and sometimes snack in fruits, so I'll taste & smell differently, different flavor la.

M: Issit? Sure anot?

J: Don't believe, try la next time with your bf or partners.

M: You say partners?

J: Cos, cos sometines, people have needs, and sometimes, their bf or gf cannot sexify them, so they look for nsa relationships. All are matured adults, and it's a mutual understanding.

M: Like that not dangerous meh? Can have AIDS or STD... Wear cindom also not 100% safe.

J: But still safer than not wearing? Go medical checkup regularly lor, and best to have exclusive partner, so safer. It's like crossing the road, even though road is clear or pedestrian light is to your favor, no guarantee no car will come speeding by and knock you...

M: Orh

J: So what? You want drink, apply Yoko and/or massage?



to be continued...

Indivisual
14-12-2014, 03:29 AM
M: Can apply Yoko for me first, then massage and then we drink?

J: Can, as long as you like.

M: Hehe, but can off the lights? I shy la.

J: But off the lights, how to apply? I cannot see where lah....

M: I hold your hand and guide you.

Sibeh sian, I thought, cannot see anything. But little did I know that sibeh sian is the least of my concern! I moved on to switch off the lights, climbed onto my bed & discovered that M had already removed her robe. She handed me the Yoko rub & guided my right hand onto her lower back.

M: Over here, from here to here.

J: Ok.

Proceeded to apply for her. Then I started to massage her shoulders, using long & slow strokes, and slowly downwards, sitting astride her, my bum on her bum... nice firm bum she has, I thought...

However, in my haste, I forgot that I'm not wearing any underwear beneath my robes, and in no time, I started to feel a tingling & burning sensation on my scrotum! Shit! Must tahan! However, the sensation gets abit unbearable, so I moved my left hand downwards to try rub it off, forgetting that my hands have been coated with the Yoko rub and I had touched the length of my lil bro as well!!! Fellow bros who've accidently kena this type of feelings & sensation will know what I mean.


to be continued...

decepticon73
14-12-2014, 07:50 AM
F... K yoko yoko sibei hot siahhhh

Indivisual
14-12-2014, 08:48 AM
F... K yoko yoko sibei hot siahhhh
Tell me about it! Sibeh hot is an understatement & it doesn't helps that the generous me applied a copious amount on her lower back & my lil bro's mushroom head kena also! Only positive thing I got from it is that it can definitely make you last longer cos of the numbing hot sensation, but she kena affected as well when I inserted into her! Will share that part later in my post.

Met up wif her again earlier, had early brekkie & 3 rounds at Sembawang Park before daybreak. Now she's in the shower so I can post. Will post more when convenient, so stay tuned to this thread FM (F**k Me) 99.999, The Almost Perfect Ten...

eddtan1
14-12-2014, 11:19 AM
Tell me about it! Sibeh hot is an understatement & it doesn't helps that the generous me applied a copious amount on her lower back & my lil bro's mushroom head kena also! Only positive thing I got from it is that it can definitely make you last longer cos of the numbing hot sensation, but she kena affected as well when I inserted into her! Will share that part later in my post.

Met up wif her again earlier, had early brekkie & 3 rounds at Sembawang Park before daybreak. Now she's in the shower so I can post. Will post more when convenient, so stay tuned to this thread FM (F**k Me) 99.999, The Almost Perfect Ten...

Perfect 10 mate...go on...
Filling up 3rd glass..hic hic

Indivisual
14-12-2014, 11:31 AM
Perfect 10 mate...go on...
Filling up 3rd glass..hic hic
Somebody is snuggling beside me watching tv & I told her am replying work email. So not exactly convenient to write the story more... later kena caught sure die co*k standing! Will update more after she leaves or fall asleep, whichever is faster. Hehe...

eddtan1
14-12-2014, 01:10 PM
Somebody is snuggling beside me watching tv & I told her am replying work email. So not exactly convenient to write the story more... later kena caught sure die co*k standing! Will update more after she leaves or fall asleep, whichever is faster. Hehe...

Ok..
See you later, Mate

Stranger
14-12-2014, 02:27 PM
TS.. Pls do continue.. I love ah lian!! Whahaha.. :)

Valuable
14-12-2014, 10:06 PM
Good story..please continue :D

alec
15-12-2014, 12:41 PM
Huat liao a!!!!

drslump99
15-12-2014, 03:03 PM
This is good
do continue soon ... :D
up u point soon. used up mine today

humpaville
15-12-2014, 03:12 PM
hahaha yoko on the balls... you crack me up man!

Yes i do know the feeling! lmao

Indivisual
17-12-2014, 12:33 AM
Hi all, hope this update finds you well. Apologies for the delayed updates as I've been having a hectic week. Managed to find some time on Moanday though to catch a movie in between appointments. Didn't know that GV Yishun is having a promo - pay to watch a movie & get to watch a live show for free too! I'll post that live-show writeup on another thread in this forum A Lucky Peep.

To continue from where I've stopped, my dick & shaft was burning with a tingling sensation...

Shucks, my mind was in a whirl - to tahan & continue the massage or put out the fire...

Not wanting to malu myself, I decided on the former, gritting my teeth & taking huge amounts of deep breadth, continuing my strokes.

Reached down to her butt soon and started to knead the soft point by both sides, somewhere in the midpoint beteeen the rear & the side.

M: Ahhhh... shiok, very song. I go massage so many times but nobody press me there before.

J: You think this is song, later I make you lagi song, song until you call tolong.

M: Sure or not? Don't just say only & make me happy... I sibeh gian song eh...

J: Gian song? Where gian song?

As I was saying this, by this time, my fingers already reached down to her upper thigh. Can feel M slowly spreading open her legs as I was tracing my fingertips in slow circular motion towards the inner thigh, up to her bum, spreading her butt cheeks, tantalising her asshole which I can feel it contracting, then back to her inner thighs & up to her vulva...

By this time, I can hear a soft moan coming from J and her hips are twitching involuntarily...
Can feel her lips getting moist & as i located the clit, she was already moaning quite audibly...

M: Mmmmm... ummph... ummph...

J: Here song bo?

M: Ya, song, very song... I want I want...

Suddenly without warning, I felt M lifting her bum & her hand grabbed my lil bro. Before I can fully react, I felt lil bro's head entering M's lil sis.

J: No wait (thinking of my yoko coated lil bro but too late)

Wow, M has quite a tight pussy...

M: Cannot wait, you make me so high I buay tahan liao... Wah, your dick so thick & curvy, I like. Fill me up so fully!

I wanted to warn M about the yoko but seeing it was already too late & she was enjoying herself, I decided to just keep quiet...

M: Ahhhhh... paaaaaaaiiiiiiinnnn, hooooooootttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!



to be continued...

decepticon73
17-12-2014, 07:10 AM
Hahahaha song bo.... Yoko yoko

noobie77
17-12-2014, 07:31 AM
Looks like yoko yoko will soon be selling like hot cakes

Indivisual
17-12-2014, 10:09 AM
Hahahaha song bo.... Yoko yoko
Song bo? All I can say is that it definitely numbs the head...

Perhaps bros here who misfire may wish to apply? But remember to wear a condom after applying...

The feeling of want to cum but cannot cum, dem jialat lah!

wakakaka89
17-12-2014, 03:44 PM
up your power... good thread

hotdick69
17-12-2014, 04:07 PM
shiok ah........ camp :D

decepticon73
17-12-2014, 07:32 PM
Last time i bought new one n apply to my back pain.... It glows down to my anus..... Knnccb f king burning hottt

prettymannequin
17-12-2014, 09:36 PM
Hahah I'm loving this thread! TS you crack me up. :p

bokeru
11-07-2016, 04:45 PM
bo update?

Stormious
11-07-2016, 06:20 PM
TS pls update soon :o

peregrene
11-07-2016, 11:24 PM
Damn...this is good! Nice reading!

Garbine
11-07-2016, 11:53 PM
Haha another old thread :D