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annoy-you-must
17-05-2008, 10:06 PM
Foreword

The idea of writting erotic fiction had always came on and off my mind ever since I first read them on the internet a few years ago. However, I was never able to put my plan into action, partly because I was using a shared computer then, and partly due to my hectic lifestyle (i.e. schoolwork).

The idea came back to me a few weeks ago when I first discovered SBF. Reading other people's erotic stories had prompted me to try my hand in writting my own one. But once again, I was unable to put my plans into immediate action as I had to be in camp (serving NS now) most of the time.

Today, however, I was finally able to start on my prologue and chapter one. What was intended to be a short entry had turned out to be a long essay, I had so much ideas flooding into me that I had to spend the entire day transforming them into words.

Some may notice that I had attempted to add in a pinch of romantism into my story. This is part of my effort to add in more 'feelings' into the story, as well as to make the female character in such story seemed less like mere sexual tools to us men. The side effect of this, as you can see, is that my story ends up being a little length and slow in getting into what the horny readers out there want to read. But whether or not my attempt works well, however, I do not know.

As such, I sincerely ask for your comments upon completion of reading my first chapter. I welcome any constructive comments, especially negative ones. Be it the story being too length, too slow, too boring, too much description, language too bad, ideas overused, too pervertic, whatever. Sound off if you think my story can be better in any way.

Finally, I thank all of you for taking your time to read my rather lengthy chapters.

Annoy-you-must

annoy-you-must
19-05-2008, 04:44 PM
Prologue – The Introduction

By the time both of us entered college together, Stella and I had already been dating for two years. A princess of astonishing beauty, gentle and yet playful personality, Stella remains a central part of my life even up till this date.

Both of us first met each other on the first day of our Secondary School days, where we remained as classmates till our graduation. When I first laid my eyes on her, the first thing that left the deepest impression in me was her snow-white skin, emanating an aura of purity and innocence. Her youthfulness was accentuated by her large, sparkling almond-shaped eyes, along side with her black elbow-length hair that is tied up in a neat ponytail. However, it was her concealed giggles and sweet smiles, decorated by two cute dimples that left me most mesmerized and awestruck.

I felled deeply in love with her instantly.

Being the apprehensive boy I was back then, it took me a full two years before I gathered enough courage to approach Stella during Secondary Three, popping the ultimate question. Nevertheless, my audacious approach was immensely rewarded. We remained an indivisible couple ever since, and it was to nobody’s surprise that we chose to enter the same college.

During the days after we became a couple, Stella would frequently come over to my place just as I would frequent hers, usually to do homework together or just watch DVDs. Our frequent visitation to each other’s place was of no major issue to anyone else since both our parents would be out working on most of the days. Given our age and usually good behavior, both our parents trusted us enough to be left at home alone without any guardian or supervision.

Indeed, unbelievable as it might seem, Stella and I had never once toed out of the line when we were alone at home during that Secondary School years, despite the raging hormones during that growing up years. While the both of us did converse on some sexual issues occasionally and even exchanged dirty jokes, a soft kiss on the lips and some innocent embrace is as far as we went. One may credit such ‘achievement’ to my reluctance to ruin my ‘good-boy’ image in front of Stella, or even our cowardice and fear of major troubles (i.e. unwanted pregnancy).

Nonetheless, surely one could hardly expect a pair of teenage couple staying away from outside eyes to be together for long without making any ‘advancement’! As the both of us proceeded on to a new stage of life upon graduation from Secondary School, our relationship, too, advanced to a new level when we had our first sexual experience…

annoy-you-must
19-05-2008, 04:50 PM
Chapter 1 – First Experience

Both of us were already in a few weeks into our new college life by that first experience. Hectic as this new life may be, both Stella and I agreed not to join any CCA so that we could have more time to each other. Such was the degree of our desires to be with each one another.

Our practice of spending the day and evening at one of our houses continued as usual, except that the frequency of such increased during that first few weeks of college life as there was nothing much to be done.

It was just another seemingly usual afternoon with Stella at my house. Feeling lazy after having completed my tutorials, I was trying to take a nap in my bedroom when Stella came in, waking me up with her presence as she climb onto my bed and lied next to me.

‘Dear, can you remember anything special for today?’ Stella whispered into my ears.

Turning around to face her, I asked in return, ‘what’s so special about today?’

The sudden look of disappointment on her face broke my heart in that very same second. Indeed, that day was no ordinary day for us, and I definitely had not forgotten it: on that very day two years ago, Stella and I became an official couple.

In fact, I had been planning for this very day for months. It took me months of saving before I could book a table in a lavish restaurant for our romantic dinner that night. In an attempt to add an element of surprise into the dinner, I tried to feign ignorance about the significance of that day.

Wanting to alleviate the look of disappointment on my darling, though, I added,

‘Stella...’

‘ya?’

‘...You’re so beautiful…I Love You’

That was more than just mere words of consolation, though. As the golden rays of the afternoon sun fell on her face, it suddenly dawned on me just how much more beautiful she had grown over the years ever since I first set my sight on her. Her fair complexion, her sweet smelling hair, her pink cheeks, her moist eyes…she was more than just a beauty.

She was an angel.

Overcome by the sudden revelation, I started inching my face towards hers. Stella closed her eyes ever so gently as our lips touches. She too, started to move her body closer to mine. Soon, we were locked in tight embrace as our French kissing increased in passion.

It was as if I was brought into another world -- perhaps paradise -- at that very moment. Her sweet scent was overwhelming me; her warmth was filling up my world and her soft chest was pressing tight against mine.

Within two minutes into our acts of passion, I began to boldly cross the line of acceptance, prompted by a force unknown even to myself. Slowly but surely, I lifted up her T-shirt, my hands slowly inching up her smooth skin by the sides of her body at the same time. As my palms traverse from her waist to just beside her breast on her bra, her body quivers in ecstasy. At the same time, I could feel my cock getting harder and harder, struggling to get out of the restrain of my pants. Judging from her sharp and rapid inhalation, I could see that Stella was apparently getting increasingly aroused too.

Her lack of resistance encouraged me to go further as I removed her shirt entirely, with only a light-purple bra to protect her modesty. Without wasting much time, I proceeded to push her skirt down her slender legs. Our coordination needs seemingly no exchange of words as she kicks away her skirt from the remainder of its path and unbuttons my shirt at the same time, much to my delight.

Stella worked faster than me…very soon; I was totally naked with my manhood standing proud in the air in its maximum hard-on state, while she still had her matching bra and panties on. We smiled at each other. Stella looked incredibly sexy with one of her bra strap having slipped off her shoulder in the midst of our fury passion.

Moving forward by a little, I started kissing her moist lips again. Soon however, my gentle kisses began to move downwards from her lips to her throat to the top of her left breast. As I continued kissing the uncovered areas of her breasts, my hands found its way to the clasps of her bra, automatically starting to undo it.

At this point of time, my arousal increased still as Stella’s soft, delicate fingers began to stroke the undersides of my hard-on ever so lightly. It was unlike touching me myself, her touch was so gentle and careful. Trying not to be too distracted by her stroking fingers, I finally managed to remove her bra. Stella’s B-cup breasts were, like her fingers, soft and delicate.

Her breast felt full as I cupped my right palm tenderly over her left breast. I then brought myself to lick her erected pink nipples, at the same time trying to remove her panties with my left hand. Stella, too, was not left unoccupied as she continued stimulating my manhood in the meantime. Her other hand was clenched the bed sheet tightly in excitement while she lets out a slight moan of ecstasy.

My escalating arousal was now evident by the pre-cum that was leaking out of my hard-on. Not wanting to be relieved of the plateau phase this soon, I pushed away her stroking arm gently.

‘Please, do allow me to pleasure you first, Stella’ I whispered by her ear, licking her earlobe as I did so.

My fingers soon landed on Stella’s much lubricated pussy. To my amazement and much of my delight, her pussy was clean shaven. I could feel both my heart beat and breath doubling as I paused to stare at her beautiful smooth pussy, shiny from the juice it is releasing. My head went down to her pussy so that I could tenderly lick her clit as my fingers stroke her labia delicately, much like how she stroked my manhood just moments ago.

Both her hands (now that it is doing nothing) clenched the bed sheet even tighter as her body arched back in pleasure to my stimulation. Somehow, seeing my girl receiving so much pleasure made me even more aroused, despite me receiving no physical stimulation. I continued licking and stroking her slowly while I enjoyed watching her advance closer and closer towards orgasm.

My arousal too, was increasing more than ever, my erected manhood now dancing in the air as pre-cum continued to lubricate the head. Nonetheless, my priority being Stella’s pleasure, satisfying myself was the last thought on my mind.

It took me perhaps less than two minutes to bring Stella over the edge. She inhaled sharply and let out a soft shy moan as her body jerks slightly. For a few seconds, her body remained arched in mid-air until her orgasm finally subsides. Watching her came had been so exhilarating for me, it almost made me came too.

I did not stop there, though and instead, started kissing her labia gently again. Slowly, my soft kisses and hands made its way up to her stomach, her breast, and then her lips again. Her flushed cheeks by now complimented well with her fair skin. I was reminded of my still intense arousal when Stella once again started to stroke my manhood like before. But perhaps to much of her surprise, I held her hand and moved it away again, even though I enjoyed that touch now more than ever.

‘No, Stella. I don’t deserve this. Today is all about you’

These words were definitely surprising for her, but it definitely brought an angelic smile to her face.

Stella’s excitement was reignited when my fingers once again found its way to her pussy. This time, however, I tunneled both my index and middle fingers into her wet hole. Finding her ultimate G-spot, I began stroking it. The obvious look of pleasure on her face at that instant was almost too much for me to take. Unable to control myself, I started French-ing her while continuing to finger her with my right fingers, my left hand fondling her soft breast and my manhood resting lightly on her thighs.

Her muffled moans, alongside with my continuing arousal that was receiving no relief, brought me to a new height of intense ecstasy in a way orgasm could never give.

This time round, it took Stella more time to come. Nevertheless, her orgasm seemed to be more intense as I felt her virginal wall clenched tight on my fingers, her breast trembling along with the height of her pleasure.

This marks the conclusion of our first sexual encounter. Although my erection and arousal was lingering on, it subsided slowly as the source of stimulation expired. Stella lies on my bed beside me, gasping her breath as she tries to recover from her exhaustion. Finally ending our heated and passionate activity, I got the chance to admire Stella’s stunning naked body. Her ever curves was just perfect.

As I place a kiss on her cheek, Stella turned around and looked at me with a curious stare. She made her first statement ever since our heated activity had started.

‘Are you sure…you don’t want any…?’

My attempt in avoiding the question was feebly concealed. Picking up her clothes and handing it over to her, I said,

‘Get dressed, dear. I’ve more surprises for you tonight!

annoy-you-must
23-05-2008, 09:26 PM
been 4 days and not even a single reply...is my story really that bad? Please do give me some of your comments so that i may improve...

HANDFUL
23-05-2008, 10:14 PM
Nice n slow...

i like it.. too bad cant up u....

keep it up dude..

AD69
23-05-2008, 11:04 PM
Your story looks good. Do continue.

Galaxyforce
23-05-2008, 11:13 PM
your story is good.
If only I can write as well as you

Spud_Boy
24-05-2008, 03:05 AM
Definately a gd read.. do continue.. :)