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西北怪郎 12-12-2005 11:22 AM

a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Uncle Dnat is old liao.. so he ask me to write a poem on him and his life..... what do you people think of it huh? pls feel free to comment on it. :)

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What do you see nurses, what do you see?

Are you thinking when you are looking at me
A crabbit old man, not very wise,
Uncertain of habit, with faraway eyes,
Who dribbles his food and makes no reply
When you say in a loud voice --I do wish you'd try

Who seems not to notice the things that you do
And forever is losing a stocking or shoe,
Who unresisting or not, let you do as you will
With bathing and feeding, the long day to fill

Is that what you are thinking, is that what you see,
Then open your eyes, nurses, you're not looking at me.

I'll tell you who I am as I sit here so still,
As I do at your bidding, and I eat at your will,
I am a small child of ten with a father and mother,
Brothers and sisters who love one another,

A young boy of 16 with wings on his feet
Dreaming that soon now a lover he'll meet;
A bridegroom at 20 -- my heart gives a leap,
Remembering the vows that I promised to keep

At 25 now I have young of my own
Who need me to build a secure, happy home;
A man of 30 my young now grow fast,
Bound to each other with ties that should last,

At 40 my young sons have grown and are gone;
But my woman's beside me to see I don't mourn;
At 50, once more babies play around my knee.
Again we know children, my loved one me

Dark days are upon me, my wife is dead,
I look at the future, I shudder with dread,
For my young are all rearing young of their own
And I think of the years and the love that I've known.

I'm an old man now and nature is cruel
'tis her jest to make old age look like a fool.
The body it crumbles, grace and vigor depart,
There is now a stone where once was a heart

But inside this old carcass a young boy still dwells
And now and again my battered heart swells
I remember the joys I remember the pain,
And I'm loving and living life over again.
I think of the years all too few - gone too fast,
And accept the stark fact that nothing can last.

So open your eyes, nurses open and see
Not a crabbit old men look closer - see me.

DNAT 12-12-2005 12:28 PM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by 西北怪郎
Uncle Dnat is old liao.. so he ask me to write a poem on him and his life..... what do you people think of it huh? pls feel free to comment on it. :)

他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter :mad:

noname123 12-12-2005 02:24 PM

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Originally Posted by DNAT
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter :mad:

Old tio old lah....dare not admit meh....buay steady one...:D

acer3939 12-12-2005 02:39 PM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
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Originally Posted by DNAT
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter

Being old is not a crime keke:D

oakleyeug 12-12-2005 03:07 PM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
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Originally Posted by acer3939
Being old is not a crime keke:D


Being old and wise is still not a crime but being old and a humsiap lo is.... Juz a joke haha... But the poem is funny man

西北怪郎 12-12-2005 04:55 PM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
hmm... of course la.. being old is not a crime... every body will get old mah.. but then hor...those not very old but look very old (chao lau) wan... this one we must write poem for them.. kee kee... u know who i am talking abt or not huh ???:D

Quote:

Originally Posted by acer3939
Being old is not a crime keke


FUCKYOU 12-12-2005 05:11 PM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
like someone say.. old is old , but Sometime.. and only sometime still can :D

but most of the time.. cannot liao :D

OSF. 12-12-2005 06:11 PM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Nice Poem, keep it up bro :D

Microsoft 12-12-2005 11:53 PM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by DNAT
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter

Err.... how bout sending a will instead?? :D :p

西北怪郎 13-12-2005 07:42 AM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
hahahha Dnat kenna suan by the young and handsome MS :D

btw uncle i got song for you also.... sing to jingle ball..(Merry Christmas)

Dnat balls, Dnat balls
hanging on the wall. :D


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Originally Posted by Microsoft
Err.... how bout sending a will instead??


mebirdie 13-12-2005 08:09 AM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Old is Old

But as long as you still have the strength, do not waste your time in cheonging.

You may not know when you are not able to stand anymore
:D

ol'coyote 13-12-2005 08:43 AM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by 西北怪郎
Uncle Dnat is old liao.. so he ask me to write a poem on him and his life..... what do you people think of it huh? pls feel free to comment on it. :)

wow...really well written...
an original poem ?...

noname123 13-12-2005 09:03 AM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Why Uncle Nat Nat tiam tiam har....dare not come out and face liao...:D

FUCKYOU 13-12-2005 10:35 AM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
huh? u mean Nat nat is the lau tiko hum siap luo??? pls wait.. i go bring my loud speaker and announce to the forum :D

DNAT IS A LAU TIKO :D
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Quote:

Originally Posted by oakleyeug
Being old and wise is still not a crime but being old and a humsiap lo is....


DNAT 13-12-2005 10:50 AM

Re: a Poem for old man "DNAT"
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by noname123
Why Uncle Nat Nat tiam tiam har....dare not come out and face liao...:D

face jit ki tua lan lah ... today I got free lunch hor, dun spoil my makan mood hor ;)


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