The horny mother and the not-so-horny daughter

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Disclaimer: this is story is ULTIMATELY FAKE AND MADE UP. If you don’t like the story, you do not have to comment. Zap all you want but do up me if you like the story. I have given up on my other thread (I have one in case you did not know) because I have no idea how to continue writing without the support. Anyway I sincerely hope I can have the support of the bros here. Do give me ideas on the story as I haven really reached the mains. I do have the first few parts. Here goes.

Part 1

Ted is a 22 year old guy. He had just finished his NS and was waiting for job opportunities to come. However this was hard to come by as he failed his poly studies. Left with no choice, after taking advice from his best mate, Randy, he decided to venture into the insurance industry. Soon he became a full fledged insurance agent.

In the current climate, it is hard to earn your keep even if you are a salaried worker, more so if you are in sales. Ted was struggling to survive and was living off his meager basic salary of $800. He had been warned by his boss, Vince, that he had not hit his target for 3 straight months and he would need to leave the company if he could not hit the target this month. Feeling distressed, Ted strived harder to make cold calls and taking part in the roadshows. There came his big break.

On one of the days when he was not in the roadshow, he was busy making cold calls to the leads he had.

T: Hello, is this Mr Dave?
D: Ya, what you want?
T: Hi, this is Ted, calling from…

Click, the phone went dead.

T: Oh god, I need some luck. Damn I have no luck since morning. ZERO appointments. Vince is gonna screw me. I hope I won’t hear the famous words, “Pack your bags, you’re fired!” I need a coffee, damn.

Ted got up from his seat and made his way to the pantry. Passing by the reception counter, he saw Alicia, the receptionist. From what he heard, she was an 18 year old who was working part time and was waiting to get into university. She looked pretty like an 18 year old, young and innocent. But she had those long flowing locks and white smooth skin which Ted has a weakness for. So Ted would purposely take one big round just to glance at her and chat up with her. However, Alicia was attached already.

T: Hi Alicia, hows your day?
A: Hi, Ted, not too bad. Yours?
T: Bad, struggling man. Going for a breather. Want anything from the pantry?
A: That is so nice of you, thank you. I am fine.
T: Ok. Enjoy.
A: You too! Good luck calling.
T: Yeah thanks.

This is gonna be very long till I hit the main parts. I don wanna become a writer writing on sex. A build up is important. I hope you guys appreciate.

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Part 2

After having a sip, he went back to his calling. He realized Vince was around and he had to start making calls religiously. However, he was down with bad luck until he chanced upon a name, Eve. He thought, I bet her husband is Adam. He chuckled to himself and dialed the number, 9XXXXXXX.

Ringgg…
T: Is this Ms Eve?
E: I told you, that is your damn f***ing business. I am not going to settle it for you. I am going out soon.
T: Hi, sorry. You must gotten the wrong person. I am Ted, calling from R and W Associates.
E: Oh so sorry, I apologise for being so rude. Is there anything I can help?
T: Yes, I am Ted. I would like to check whether you have a MITB insurance policy.
E: Insurance. Oh god! Yes, I sure need insurance. MITB, hmmm.
T: (thinking that he must have struck lucky) Ok, maybe I can arrange a time to meet you to discuss about our policies?
E: Look, I am really busy. I tell you what. You message me tomorrow and I will arrange a time for you.
T: (face visibly depressed) Sure no problem. What time can I message you tomorrow?
E: Afternoon. Thank you.
T: Afternoon it is.
Click, the line went dead.
Though he had managed to get one useful lead, but from past experiences, it was more often than not, a prank by the caller. However, he was at his wits’ end. He decided to call the next day.

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Part 3
Ted checked his Blackberry phone and remembered he had to message Eve about the time of appointment.

T: Hi Eve, this is Ted. I called you yesterday regarding the appointment. What time is it convenient for you?
“Sending, message sent.”
Ted stared at the screen and wondered whether Eve would reply.
After five minutes, no response. Ted muttered, “Come on, Eve!”
There was still no response after 15 minutes. With his heart sinking, he slumped to his seat and looks dejected. Suddenly, the phone rang.

“Money, money, money….”

Ted immediately answered the phone call.
T: Hi is this Ms Eve?
E: Hi, Ted. I am sorry. I just saw your message just now.
T: Its ok. So, when can I meet you?
E: Right, let’s see. How about 3pm tomorrow?
T: Sure! Where can I meet you?
E: How about you come over to my house? Is it convenient for you?
T: Sure! I will give you a call when I reach.
E: Ok! I will SMS you my address later. Thank you so much.
T: Sure! See you tomorrow!

A voice in the background: Mum! I’m home! Oh gosh!
E: Hello my dear Kelly. Wait a minute, why are you so wet?
Suddenly the line went dead.

Ted thought to himself. WHAT? You’re wet? God, I must find out tomorrow. How wet.

That is about what I am going to contribute today. Hope you guys like it. The rest are on the way. Stay tuned.

[Hawaii88]

Camping for more.

[bananadj]

Nice build up =)

[LowKa]

Great so far...

Keep the writing coming...

[eeemen]

Interesting start up, plz carry onz, cheers .............

[birdie8819]

Me camping for "WET" story .

[naturegreen]

Nice build-up. Pitching tent for more.

[Pheonixdragon]

TS please come back with your story.

[AD69]

Looking forward to read more.

[creeve]

good effort so far. keep the writing coming in and before you know it, your points will be shooting up...

[cupid xpress]

I'll bookmark this page and open it everyday, so that I won't miss your good story.

[torresisking09]

Originally Posted by Hawaii88

Camping for more.

Originally Posted by bananadj

Nice build up =)

Originally Posted by LowKa

Great so far...

Keep the writing coming...

Originally Posted by eeemen

Interesting start up, plz carry onz, cheers .............

Originally Posted by birdie8819

Me camping for "WET" story .

Originally Posted by naturegreen

Nice build-up. Pitching tent for more.

Originally Posted by Pheonixdragon

TS please come back with your story.

Originally Posted by AD69

Looking forward to read more.

Originally Posted by creeve

good effort so far. keep the writing coming in and before you know it, your points will be shooting up...

thks for the support. i shall throw in a teaser today. i am in the midst of touching up the next few parts. stay tuned

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This is not really part of the story. In anime terms, it is called filler. I may include this storyline in the near future.

Part 4
With the appointment settled and realizing that he was not going to make any more successful cold calls, he packed his bags and left the office. When he left the office, he saw Alicia still lingering around.

T: Hey Alicia, it is almost six. Why are you still around?
A: Oh, hi Ted! I was about to go off already. So how is your day?
T: Not too bad, one appointment made. Hope it is a success tomorrow
A: Great job! I knew you could do it.
T: Yeah! Hey by the way, are you going anywhere? I am going to grab a bite. Want to join me?
A: Yeah sure! I am famished too. Why don’t you wait for me outside?
T: Sure! I need to pay my handphone bill. Oh God!
A: I bet you must run up a huge amount of bills monthly
T: Not really. Why do you say so?
A: Come on, don’t you talk to your girlfriend everyday?
T: Nope. I don’t have one
A: You don’t have one? You must be joking …
T: I am serious. I have been single since my girlfriend broke up with me in my army days.
Suddenly there is an air of awkwardness surrounding the both of them.
A: Oops sorry.
T: Nah, its ok. I better make my way down. See ya later
On his way down, Ted realized Alicia’s girlfriend, Shawn just enlisted into the army. He thought: Are they facing problems? No time for Alicia? Wild thoughts began running through his mind. After much thought, he realized he was thinking too much, maybe he was having a crush on Alicia? Ted quickly erased his thoughts and went to the AXS machine to pay his bills.

After 10 minutes…
Alicia made her way down…
A: Hey Ted, where do you want to go to eat?
T: I am fine with anything. Are you going to anywhere else?
A: I am meeting my gal friends for shopping later in town
T: Ok… is Vivo fine with you?
A: Sure, lets go…

Alicia and Ted took the direct bus to Vivo. To minus all the crap, the both of them decided on Marche. For those been to Marche, there is a little cottage within the restaurant itself. Ted chose to sit inside despite empty seats around (4-5pm only, that’s why). Ted ordered his chicken stew while Alicia ordered her rosti (the potato stuff). They sat down and started eating, but remained very quiet, perhaps due to the awkward incident just now.

A: Ted, sorry for just now. I didn’t mean it
T: Alicia, its ok.
T: Its not surprising anyway. Army boy, girlfriend runs away with older guy, a few of my army mates also same situation. Nothing new.
A: (smiling) Really?
T: Yeah, it happens all the time.
A: Then why haven’t you found a new one?
T: Girlfriend? Nah, I am so busy with work. I don’t even have time to go clubbing.
A: Wow, what a waste for the girls out there then.
Suddenly the air of awkwardness was back again. Alicia stared at Ted, but Ted tried to avoid her stare. Unknowingly, the two of them inched their heads forward. This was a chance for Ted to make advances on Alicia, although he knew it was impossible. As their lips neared each others, Alicia stopped dead in her tracks.
A: Sorry, I did not mean it at all.
T: Err… its my fault too.
A: Ok.. So…
10 seconds of silence…
A: (smiling) Ted, you know what? I find you pretty cute.
T: (stammering) Errr.. Thanks.
A: Haha, ok… Lets make a move then…
T: Ok…
As Alicia was heading to town and Ted had a direct bus home, they parted ways near the train station.
A: Thanks for the company today.
T: Ok…
A: (smiling) Good luck tomorrow and don’t think too much ok.
T: Ok thanks.
A: Ok see you.
T: Bye.
An unexpected hug from Alicia startled Ted. Normally Ted hardly could get close to Alicia, now he’s hugging her! Though Alicia was skinny, the white smooth skin was what Ted had been longing for! Although it was only a customary hug, it was enough to satisfy him. After the hug they parted ways.

On the bus, Ted thought to himself. We nearly kissed. Oh my god! What’s going on! And she said I am cute. Cute was not the word to describe him though there have been people saying he looks like Wilber Pan. Though it was his chance to make advancements, he realized the pains of being dumped whilst in the army. Hence he decided to get a hold of himself. He thought I have been through this; I don’t want anyone to go through the same pain. I got to focus on myself! I cannot get distracted. With that he decided to give up thinking about Alicia and focused on his task tomorrow.

That’s the end of the filler! Hope you guys enjoyed it. Stay tuned for more over the weekend!